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Title: “The Thing from Within the Drain”
Author: James Deviant
Genre: Erotic Horror
Premise:
Sabrina, a 24-year-old fitness influencer, films her workouts at the gym late at night for her social media. Unbeknownst to her, a creature residing in the gym’s pipes becomes fixated on her. After her workout, Sabrina heads to the locker room for a shower, where the creature, “The Thing,” emerges from the drain and entraps her with its tentacles, leading to a perilous and pleasurable encounter.
Characters:
Sabrina, aiming for perfect social media content, works out late at the gym, much to the annoyance of Jackie, the exhausted attendant. While Sabrina films her routine, a strange eye from the gym’s drain watches her, unnoticed. After her session, Sabrina heads to the locker room, where she hears odd noises but dismisses them.
In the shower, Sabrina discovers a creepy eye in the drain, and soon after, The Thing’s tentacles emerge, ensnaring her. The creature overwhelms her with intense, alien sensations, leading to a climactic encounter where Sabrina is covered in a milky substance. As she regains her senses, she realizes she is in grave danger, as The Thing desires her permanently.
More about the plot is in the attached full screenplay.
Author: James Deviant
Genre: Erotic Horror
Premise:
Sabrina, a 24-year-old fitness influencer, films her workouts at the gym late at night for her social media. Unbeknownst to her, a creature residing in the gym’s pipes becomes fixated on her. After her workout, Sabrina heads to the locker room for a shower, where the creature, “The Thing,” emerges from the drain and entraps her with its tentacles, leading to a perilous and pleasurable encounter.
Characters:
- Sabrina: A 24-year-old blonde fitness enthusiast with a tanned, athletic build and a bubbly personality. She’s focused on becoming a digital influencer and enjoys being admired. She wears a revealing white top, pink butt-lifting shorts, and colorful sneakers.
- Jackie: The gym attendant, who is tired and slightly annoyed by Sabrina’s late workout but adheres to the gym’s policy. She wears a gray or green coat, yoga pants, and a gym-branded T-shirt.
- The Thing: An elusive creature living in the gym's pipes, from which we can only see are its tentacles and a sole human-like creepy eye. One can imagine it has a tubular body with a head full of tentacles and proboscis-like structures, much like a burrowing polychaete (see attached image). Its body remains mostly hidden, but it becomes dangerously interested in Sabrina.
Sabrina, aiming for perfect social media content, works out late at the gym, much to the annoyance of Jackie, the exhausted attendant. While Sabrina films her routine, a strange eye from the gym’s drain watches her, unnoticed. After her session, Sabrina heads to the locker room, where she hears odd noises but dismisses them.
In the shower, Sabrina discovers a creepy eye in the drain, and soon after, The Thing’s tentacles emerge, ensnaring her. The creature overwhelms her with intense, alien sensations, leading to a climactic encounter where Sabrina is covered in a milky substance. As she regains her senses, she realizes she is in grave danger, as The Thing desires her permanently.
More about the plot is in the attached full screenplay.
