HarumiHie
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Preface
“To say Justin and his Möm don’t see eye to eye is putting it lightly. They are constantly at one another’s throats, that’s why Justin is looking forward to spending time away from home with his Däd as well as his Däd’s new partner, Kendra. However Justin’s Möm warns her sön that in spite of Kendra’s warm demeanour and good intentions, she may not be all that she seems...”
Was inspired to write this script after learning Ricky Greenwood will be directing videos for the upcoming Unbirth site. I’ve absolutely adored his features for Hentaied, Parasited and SomeGöre so I’m really happy to hear he’s shooting for Unbirth, especially after his use of Unbirthing in Parasited’s Hostile Takeover. He’s introduced some amazing models onto the sites however this script in particular had a personal favourite of mine written in mind.
Kendra Sunderland is arguably my favourite model that’s been featured in Ricky’s videos. It appears I’m not the only one who seems to think so too. I loved her performance in Hentaied’s From The Sky and can’t wait for her Parasited debut which, as of writing this, hasn’t been released yet. I really hope we can see her appear on an Unbirth video. Even if this script never gets adapted, it’s at least a pitch for her feature in the future hopefully.
The story of this script was inspired by the film Coraline, particularly the character of “Other Möther”. I was originally going to write a script more akin to the original story, with the actress wearing button eyes and transforming into a giant half-woman half-spider but considering the kind of budget that would require, I decided to go with a story that’s a lot more workable and based off the same concept of a woman who seems like a better role model but is only using a facade to prey upon the protagonist.
Script (1/2)
Cut to:
Int. Möm’s House - Day
JUSTIN is a young man in his bedroom packing his suitcase full of clothing. His MÖM yells out to him from another room in the house.
Möm (O.S)
(Yelling) Justin! Justin!
Clearly annoyed, Justin takes a deep breath to calm himself down. He leans out of his bedroom doorway to respond to his Möm.
Justin (Raised Voice)
Yeah?… yeah?!
Not getting a response back, he paces downstairs into the kitchen where she is looking through various cabinets.
Justin
Did you need me?
Möm
Yeah, help me find the charger for my phone.
Justin
Um, I’m kind of in a rush right now.
Möm
Oh, so this getaway with your fäther is more important than helping me out?
Justin
C’mon, I never said that.
Möm
You might as well have. I don’t ask you to do much so for once jus-
Justin’s Möm is interrupted by the sound of a car horn outside. Both Justin and his Möm look out the window to see a young, blonde woman pull up in a fancy car. Justin’s face lights up.
Justin
That’s my ride, sorry Möm.
He races upstairs to his bedroom whilst his Möm lingers at the window, still looking at the woman.
Möm (Yelling)
Justin? Who is that?
Justin (O.S)
That’s KENDRA, Däd’s girlfriend.
His Möm pulls a stern expression as she stares at Kendra through the kitchen window.
Cut to:
Ext. Möm’s House - Day
Justin leaves through the front door with his luggage in hand. He waves at Kendra to which she waves back. As he’s walking to her car, his Möm appears standing by the front door.
Möm
Justin, wait.
Justin stops and looks back at his Möm.
Justin
What now?
Möm
You’re not going.
Justin (Confused)
What?
Möm
Get back in the house.
Justin
Why?
Möm
That woman. There’s something about her that’s wrong.
Justin takes another deep breath to relieve him of his stress.
Justin
… I’m going.
Möm
Justin!
Justin turns away from his Möm and walks to Kendra’s car. He places his suitcase into her trunk whilst his Möm and Kendra stare at one another. Justin gets inside of Kendra’s car. As he does, Kendra smirks at Justin’s Möm before driving off.
Cut to:
Int. Foyer - Night
Justin and Kendra enter through the front door and turn the lights on, revealing the interior of a luxurious home. The pair take off their shoes and coats.
Justin (Calls out)
Däd? You home?
Kendra
Sorry buddy, he’s at work for the next two hours so it’s just me and you for the meantime.
Justin
That’s fine. Was there anything you’d like to do together?
Kendra
Well… there’s a movie theatre not too far from here. We can go watch something to kill some time before your Däd gets back. That’s if you’d like to?
Justin
I’d love to. I’ll just pack my things away and- oh.
Kendra notices Justin acting rather shy all of a sudden.
Kendra
What’s wrong?
Justin
It’s just, um… your, err…
Justin hesitantly points to Kendra’s shirt. She looks down to see two wet patches have appeared on her chest, leaking through her shirt.
Kendra
Oh! God damn it, I’m so sorry you had to see that Justin.
Justin tries to resist looking at Kendra’s shirt as her wet clothes make it easier to see through them.
Kendra
I’m just going to take a quick shower and change my clothes. When you’re ready, come inside mine and your Däd’s room then we’ll head off, okay?
Justin awkwardly nods his head in response.
Kendra
Okay. See you in a minute, sweetie.
As she heads off upstairs, Justin breathes heavily in an attempt to cool himself off, overwhelmed by what he’s seen.
Cut to:
Int. En-suite - Night
Kendra enters the bathroom where she looks at herself in the mirror, particularly the wet patches on her shirt in the reflection.
Kendra
Mmm… that should do the trick.
“To say Justin and his Möm don’t see eye to eye is putting it lightly. They are constantly at one another’s throats, that’s why Justin is looking forward to spending time away from home with his Däd as well as his Däd’s new partner, Kendra. However Justin’s Möm warns her sön that in spite of Kendra’s warm demeanour and good intentions, she may not be all that she seems...”
Was inspired to write this script after learning Ricky Greenwood will be directing videos for the upcoming Unbirth site. I’ve absolutely adored his features for Hentaied, Parasited and SomeGöre so I’m really happy to hear he’s shooting for Unbirth, especially after his use of Unbirthing in Parasited’s Hostile Takeover. He’s introduced some amazing models onto the sites however this script in particular had a personal favourite of mine written in mind.
Kendra Sunderland is arguably my favourite model that’s been featured in Ricky’s videos. It appears I’m not the only one who seems to think so too. I loved her performance in Hentaied’s From The Sky and can’t wait for her Parasited debut which, as of writing this, hasn’t been released yet. I really hope we can see her appear on an Unbirth video. Even if this script never gets adapted, it’s at least a pitch for her feature in the future hopefully.
The story of this script was inspired by the film Coraline, particularly the character of “Other Möther”. I was originally going to write a script more akin to the original story, with the actress wearing button eyes and transforming into a giant half-woman half-spider but considering the kind of budget that would require, I decided to go with a story that’s a lot more workable and based off the same concept of a woman who seems like a better role model but is only using a facade to prey upon the protagonist.
Script (1/2)
Cut to:
Int. Möm’s House - Day
JUSTIN is a young man in his bedroom packing his suitcase full of clothing. His MÖM yells out to him from another room in the house.
Möm (O.S)
(Yelling) Justin! Justin!
Clearly annoyed, Justin takes a deep breath to calm himself down. He leans out of his bedroom doorway to respond to his Möm.
Justin (Raised Voice)
Yeah?… yeah?!
Not getting a response back, he paces downstairs into the kitchen where she is looking through various cabinets.
Justin
Did you need me?
Möm
Yeah, help me find the charger for my phone.
Justin
Um, I’m kind of in a rush right now.
Möm
Oh, so this getaway with your fäther is more important than helping me out?
Justin
C’mon, I never said that.
Möm
You might as well have. I don’t ask you to do much so for once jus-
Justin’s Möm is interrupted by the sound of a car horn outside. Both Justin and his Möm look out the window to see a young, blonde woman pull up in a fancy car. Justin’s face lights up.
Justin
That’s my ride, sorry Möm.
He races upstairs to his bedroom whilst his Möm lingers at the window, still looking at the woman.
Möm (Yelling)
Justin? Who is that?
Justin (O.S)
That’s KENDRA, Däd’s girlfriend.
His Möm pulls a stern expression as she stares at Kendra through the kitchen window.
Cut to:
Ext. Möm’s House - Day
Justin leaves through the front door with his luggage in hand. He waves at Kendra to which she waves back. As he’s walking to her car, his Möm appears standing by the front door.
Möm
Justin, wait.
Justin stops and looks back at his Möm.
Justin
What now?
Möm
You’re not going.
Justin (Confused)
What?
Möm
Get back in the house.
Justin
Why?
Möm
That woman. There’s something about her that’s wrong.
Justin takes another deep breath to relieve him of his stress.
Justin
… I’m going.
Möm
Justin!
Justin turns away from his Möm and walks to Kendra’s car. He places his suitcase into her trunk whilst his Möm and Kendra stare at one another. Justin gets inside of Kendra’s car. As he does, Kendra smirks at Justin’s Möm before driving off.
Cut to:
Int. Foyer - Night
Justin and Kendra enter through the front door and turn the lights on, revealing the interior of a luxurious home. The pair take off their shoes and coats.
Justin (Calls out)
Däd? You home?
Kendra
Sorry buddy, he’s at work for the next two hours so it’s just me and you for the meantime.
Justin
That’s fine. Was there anything you’d like to do together?
Kendra
Well… there’s a movie theatre not too far from here. We can go watch something to kill some time before your Däd gets back. That’s if you’d like to?
Justin
I’d love to. I’ll just pack my things away and- oh.
Kendra notices Justin acting rather shy all of a sudden.
Kendra
What’s wrong?
Justin
It’s just, um… your, err…
Justin hesitantly points to Kendra’s shirt. She looks down to see two wet patches have appeared on her chest, leaking through her shirt.
Kendra
Oh! God damn it, I’m so sorry you had to see that Justin.
Justin tries to resist looking at Kendra’s shirt as her wet clothes make it easier to see through them.
Kendra
I’m just going to take a quick shower and change my clothes. When you’re ready, come inside mine and your Däd’s room then we’ll head off, okay?
Justin awkwardly nods his head in response.
Kendra
Okay. See you in a minute, sweetie.
As she heads off upstairs, Justin breathes heavily in an attempt to cool himself off, overwhelmed by what he’s seen.
Cut to:
Int. En-suite - Night
Kendra enters the bathroom where she looks at herself in the mirror, particularly the wet patches on her shirt in the reflection.
Kendra
Mmm… that should do the trick.