a fateful/fatal present

Valarion

Member
Due to the current christmas time something come to my mind ...
I think it would easily be possible to adopt this idea also to a birthday party setting or something similar, but I want to share this idea in the christmas setting. Like always it's just an suggestion so feel free to adopt some parts, make changes or even never implementing it -what of course would be sad ;)
Even I'm not sure about the whole script so I share my incomplete approaches...
In the christmas setting we are - surprise, surprise - in a christmas setting.
We are seeing a beautiful girl in front of two presents under the christmas tree. One present box looks sweet and nice, the other one dark/ominous/malign. There are different aliens/tentacles/monsters caught in this boxes (like the ghost busters boxes) the good/lovely/nice one in the sweet looking box, the bad and more thrilling one in the other box. It's a sexual experimental present. Now there are different options for the story:
  1. The sweet girl is undecided but is a bit scared of the dark box and chooses the nice looking one. She opens the box and enjoys a nice sexual journey with the alien/tentacle - maybe at first just in her pussy. During this process she or the tentacle accidentally hit the other bad looking box and frees the Krampus-Style monster/tentacle - darker, thrilling shape, bigger and a bit scary looking. The girl still enjoys the session with the "good alien" and first realizes that the "bad one" is free when it's to late and the tentacle/monster is entering her ass. From this moment she is getting fucked from both ones or maybe the "bad alien" is banishing or chasing away the "good one" and is taking over the situation.
  2. The sweet girl is undecided but is a bit scared of the dark box and chooses the nice looking one. Now we are seeing a flash back and we find out that there was a mistake during the packaging process - the content of the to boxes got exchanged so the girl accidentally choose the "bad box". When she realizes her mistake it's already to late....
  3. It would also be possible to add some magic like a wrong gone spell which is freeing the "bad one" or turning the "good one" in the "bad one"
  4. If its a setting with two or three girls it would be possible to add a decision process where the third girl decides which girl was a good girl (getting rewarded with the nice looking present) and which one was a bad girl (getting "punished" with the more "Krampus-style"/bad box"). Now we are seeing both girls interacting with her box and the content. The "good girl" in a more lovely setting, the "bad girl" in a darker and more thrilling/harder setting.
  5. ....feel free to add a bunch of different options or ideas...
Some clarification what is meant with "good" and "bad":
its related to the sexual style (lovely/nice vs. harder/more forcing), shape of the monster/tentacle (nice/good looking vs. some kind of thrilling/bigger), the atmosphere (music and the general setting) and the mindset/acting/behaviour of the girl during the interaction with the different tentacles/monster (lovely and nice vs. some kind of scared)
I like the possibility to play with these two different styles in one story and the option to arrange a diverse setting with some thrilling story line.
That's it ;)
 

Valarion

Member
Yeah! The competitive aspect combined with the rewarding and punishing finish is also a great supplement.
On the other hand a "there are five boxes and you have to choose one" - scenario (and maybe the viewer knows which box contains which alien/monster) is also a nice thought. Maybe a series with 5 girls and 5 boxes and in every part one girl have to choose one box - containing "nice" and "bad" aliens/monsters. Or a disastrous end where multiple box got opened and many different aliens/monsters got exempt.
It could also be a setting at the home of a scientific magician who collects those aliens/monsters...
So many possibilities :D
 

Ivy

Active member
These are some really good ideas @JimboTimbi

The mention of boxes kind of makes me think of Pandora's Box, but in this case, instead of all the bad things in the world, I imagine more of the "bad" things sexually like mind control, restraints, ****** oviposition, etc. So if I were to add a fantasy element to it, I would imagine the setting as you say would be "at the home of a scientific magician" and the bad box would teleport the girl/girls to another place where there would be a backdrop of a meatwall for example.

I definitely agree with @Lostarion that 4 would be a great way to go, however, if ****** to just have one girl in the scene (scheduling issues for example) then 1 is definitely an interesting idea to explore.

How do you imagine the ending to be? Would the girl be in shock afterwards? Possible be left wanting more? Or something more sinister like being used for "eternity"?
 

Valarion

Member
Thank you!
Honestly... I'm undecided. I really like the first und fourth (supplemented with those competitive elements) setting.
Additionally I lost my mind to the "pervert alien game show" idea as a longer story...
I have a setting in mind with four or five girls (human, elves etc.). They are taking part in these game show, trying to get the "who can take the most in universe" thropy for her planet.
There are different quests which are getting harder and harder (more forcing, "extremer") the longer the competition goes. Either the one who has the worst result have to leave the competition immediately or there is someting like a scoreboard so somebody can have a come back if she takes more effort to the next quest...
Some ideas about the quests:
  • Who can milkes the most out of alien/monster x?
  • Who can takes alien/monster y the longest? Some girls have to quit the session after a few minutes, some can handle it very long and getting more points
  • Who can take alien/monster z the deepest? Also here again, some girls have to quit after a few centimeter and some can take it all the way through... getting more points
  • ...
At the last part there could be something like a final boss and a "fight" between the best ranked or last two or three girls trying to endure the hardest session at all.
At the end there is a winning planet but you can literally see how exhausted the whole competition was.

See you at the next games ;)

I think now we have two settings/ideas... the gift one and the competition/game show one :D
 

Valarion

Member
Yeah, I think maybe you are right - two girls and the steadily switching is a great option. Otherwise it could be just one girl but in some kind of parallel universe - one girl dressed more sweet and the other one more sexy/bad girl like.

However I'm still a friend of this accidentally open the "wrong" box while in action and freeing the bad alien, because I like the idea that the bad one is fighting with the good one and banishing him while taking over the whole situation and the girl is watching/feeling it - a bit hoping that the good one will win it... what's of course not going to happen. The girl is totally overstrained with those fight on, in and for her.
Maybe the good one is inside the girls mouth while the bad one is entering the ass, going all the way through and banishing the good one or the good one is in her ass and the bad one entering her mouth, going all the way through and pushes the good one out of the ass...something like that. A fight for the girl... on and in the girl :D
Maybe it could be a third option/idea or just a part of another story.

To the game show idea:
Like you mentioned the different characters would be super cool and I think/hope that the location topic is not that difficult. The sports reporter or even sports reporter and referee in one person is also an great idea - interviewing the girls and e.g. taking measures in the "who can take it the deepest" competition and proclaiming the results.
I think that could be a great project with the possibility to make it a three to five long series with the option for introducing different girls/species and aliens. If it's working well it could even be a recurring thing (steadily changing the quests, girls and aliens) - a yearly or every two year happening competition or game show.
You could even be telling a story why those competition was implemented.
 

Stanz

New member
I love the above ideas and of course a nod to 'Ghostbusters' is always welcomed.

I felt that the dream sequence could lend itself to a Hentied version. Three woman could be asleep after catching an unknown tentacle creature.

Exhausted are now asleep when the thing escapes from either a containment like unit or trap and starts to crawl into bed, pulling covers down, unzipping the flight suits (going inside the pant leg after boots were taken off? sleeping barefoot) A mixture of naked under the uniform or underwear IF you really want to flex a belt like in the orginal!

You can go inside the dream for the heavier scenes or the character wakes up to see this happening in time to do another trait of Hentied and Parasite which is to cross eyes as the tentacles take hold.

To finish an orgasm and roll off the bed naked (cute bum shot) and off the bed, one is kicking off the flight suit from her ankles like Egon* and one just comfortable with the experience like Peter... rolling off the bed which wakes the other now naked girls who look over.

Any casting ideas anyone?
 

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