Initial idea for a script/custom (will be updated with more soon). Looking for feedback

Spiral

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Start in dark room, unidentified person working at a computer editing some strange porn with alien symbols. Strange creature attached to there head, pulsing and leaking slime. Screen says file complete as a disc comes out and is slid into an envelope......

Older woman (a journalist) arrives home, doing mundane things around the house. She is working on a story about strange alien events (can reference other videos). A strange creature is posted through letter box, it quickly heads up the door to the ceiling. Next a large brown envelope comes through and lands with a large thud... At her computer the woman hears this and goes to investigate, she finds a brown envelope on the floor, addressed to her with the instructions "They are here, watch somewhere secure, for your eyes only." Opening it she finds a disc and a strange cylinder device.

Taking the disc and envelope upstairs to the bedroom she places the disc in the DVD player, grabs her notebook, sits on the edge of the bed and turns it on. She is greeted by strange symbols, alien text and alien language (could mix in some previews of other clips in the background). The woman can only sit and stare, her body relaxing and going limp, dropping the notebook, her mouth just dropping open as she drools a little. POV of the alien slug enters the room heads to the ceiling and looks down at its prey, blobs of slime drop down landing onto the woman's face and chest. With one hand she bushes the slime off her face and licks it off, with the other she begins massaging it it her breasts, opening her shirt as she does revealing her breasts and a sexy bra. The alien text and language starts to become clear, telling her she will be there mindless slave, a breeder. It offers her endless pleasure if she masturbates and lets them empty her mind. As her hand slides down to her pussy she has a moment of clarity, she breaks free of the trance and breaks for the door, but it is slammed shut by a mysterious *****. Banging on the door and trying to pull it open she screams for help. The voice on the TV, angry, tells her to turn around. The room begins to change colours, she closes her eyes and covers her ears trying to block the commands. Suddenly the room fills with a strange green mist, not realizing she begins breathing it in. Her hands return to her breasts as more slime falls on her. Rubbing it into her skin again she throws the bra off and begins rubbing the slime onto her nipples, enlarging and hardening them, from the ceiling breast shaped suckers come down and attach to her breasts and start milking them. The finally the slime reaches her pussy and all is lost. She is commanded to take the silver cylinder , remove the last of her clothes and use it on her pussy. She can't stop feverishly masturbating, screaming she'll obey her new alien masters and be there breeder etc. Time passes and we find her on her knees in front of the T.V, hot, sweaty and covered in slime, her mind totally gone, her body nothing but an empty shell. On the TV screen her mind is trapped, banging on the inside of the screen to be set free. The empty body is led to the bath filled with many parasites in red slime, the body steps in and submerges itself under the slime. This is where it is refilled with a new purpose.

Future parts would include the husband returning home to be seduced and taken by the "wife" and older children, step children or another couple coming around to have a similar fate.

This is just a rough first draught so let me know what you think.
 
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