HarumiHie
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A potential sequel idea to Hentaied’s Heartache for the upcoming Unbirth site. This follow up has Amirah desperately searching for Lia, the woman who unbirthed her friend Clemence in the first video. I wanted to give an add more along the lines of the plot in regards to Amirah’s relationship with Clemence and why she rejected her in the original video, whilst also adding more to the evil entity Lia plays, one that uses unbirthing to absorb victims as well as take on new identities.
Script
Fade in:
Int. Interrogation Room
AMIRAH, sits before a desk in a small, isolated room with nothing more than a door and a mirror. She wears creased-up casual clothing that appears to have been worn for days. Visibly upset and tired, she stares into nothingness with a blank expression. The opening of the door makes Amirah flinch. A DETECTIVE walks in with a file of papers in his hand. He sits opposing Amirah on the desk.
Detective (Clears throat)
Alright, let’s go over this again. As the last known person to have seen your friend CLEMENCE alive, tell me what you remember.
Amirah (Frustrated)
Are you serious?! I’ve already told you everything! We were walking in the park-
Detective (Pointing)
Where you left her after rejecting her, right?
Amirah
Yes! I didn’t know what else to do! I didn’t think she’d be- (Deep breath) … I got in my car and sat there, thinking things over.
Detective
And then?
Amirah
I saw her walking with somebody else. She looked… happy with her, even though she was a total stranger.
Detective
And that was the last time you saw her, correct?
Amirah hesitated to answer at first. A quick, sudden flashback shows us Amirah witnessing Clemence and Lia making love whilst she masturbates outside. Back in the interrogation room, Amirah gives her answer.
Amirah
… yes, nobody has seen her since.
Detective
This stranger, you’re positive this is a stranger to Clemence?
Amirah
Clemence told me everything all the time, she never once mentioned this woman before.
Detective (Pulls out sheet)
I see that you’ve already had a meeting with our sketch artist, this is what the woman looks like?
Amirah is handed a sketch of the woman she saw with Clemence. We have a quick flashback to Amirah watching Clemence making love to the suspect, LIA. Returning to the interrogation room, Amirah shudders upon looking at the sketch.
Amirah
That’s her, that’s the one.
Detective
… see, the problem, Miss Adara, is that we simply can’t find a match for this woman. Those who closely resemble this woman all have proven alibis. Are you certain this sketch is accurate or do we need to-
Amirah (Angry)
Yes! It is! You all look at me like I’m fucking crazy! This is the woman who took Clemence from me!
Cut to:
Ext. Police Station - Day
The credits roll as Amirah exits the station, nearing the verge of tears. She composes herself and begins to walk home.
Cut to:
Ext. Street - Day
As Amirah is walking down the street, she comes to a stop with a worried look. She turns around. Nobody’s there. With no one around, Amirah carries on walking.
Cut to:
Ext. Front Door - Day
Amirah turns towards a house on the street. Approaching a front door, she takes her keys out of her pocket before accidentally dropping them to the ground. When Amirah bends down to pick the keys off the ground, we see a woman in the distance watching Amirah. Whilst it’s hard to make out, the woman appears to have dark skin, black hair and wearing a green trench coat. The spitting image of Lia.
Amirah rises from the ground before a fearful expression grows on her face as if she knew she was being watched. She twists her head around. The watchful woman was gone. Scared for her safety, Amirah unlocks the door and barges into the house.
Cut to:
Int. Living Room - Day
VERONICA is in the living room performing an intense workout on the floor, following a video guide on the TV. Wearing a sports bra and gym shorts, Veronica is covered in sweat from her exercising. She hears the front door open and looks up from her workout position towards the hallway.
Veronica (Breathless)
Hey, how was you’re-
Amirah storms past the living room, racing up the stairs without acknowledging Veronica. Rising up onto her feet and pausing the TV, Veronica looks up at the ceiling with a sorrowful expression.
Cut to:
Int. Amirah’s Bedroom - Day
Amirah is in her bed, curled up in a ball, crying. We hear a knock on her door before Veronica enters the room.
Veronica (Soft voice)
Hey. I take that it didn’t go well?
Amirah (Crying)
Nobody believes me! The police aren’t doing anything and I can’t stop thinking about what I saw! It’s like a nightmare playing over and over again in my head!
Veronica perches herself next to Amirah on the bed. She holds Amirah’s hands as a sign of comfort. Veronica looks deeply into her eyes.
Veronica (Affirming)
Listen to me, I believe in you. We’ve been roommates for years, a friend of yours is a friend of mine. I promise you we’ll both find this monster who took Clemence. But to do that, you need to rest. The stress and pressure you’re putting on yourself, it’s breaking you down. All I’m asking is for you to recover and we’ll find this woman together.
Amirah wipes away the tears in her eyes.
Amirah (Emotional)
Okay. Okay I will. I really needed to hear that, thank you Veronica.
The two smile at one another before going in for a hug. When they let go, Amirah gets closer to Veronica’s face. Veronica slightly backs away.
Amirah
I’m… I’m sorry I… I don’t know what I was thinking and-
Veronica (Brushes it off)
Hey, it’s alright, don’t worry about it.
Veronica does what she can to change the mood.
Veronica (High-toned)
Say, I’m quite stinky at the moment so I’m gonna take a shower. Take a nap for a bit and if you need anything, just let me know, okay?
Amirah nods her head as Veronica leaves the room. Her head falls into her hands, regretting her approach with Veronica.
Script
Fade in:
Int. Interrogation Room
AMIRAH, sits before a desk in a small, isolated room with nothing more than a door and a mirror. She wears creased-up casual clothing that appears to have been worn for days. Visibly upset and tired, she stares into nothingness with a blank expression. The opening of the door makes Amirah flinch. A DETECTIVE walks in with a file of papers in his hand. He sits opposing Amirah on the desk.
Detective (Clears throat)
Alright, let’s go over this again. As the last known person to have seen your friend CLEMENCE alive, tell me what you remember.
Amirah (Frustrated)
Are you serious?! I’ve already told you everything! We were walking in the park-
Detective (Pointing)
Where you left her after rejecting her, right?
Amirah
Yes! I didn’t know what else to do! I didn’t think she’d be- (Deep breath) … I got in my car and sat there, thinking things over.
Detective
And then?
Amirah
I saw her walking with somebody else. She looked… happy with her, even though she was a total stranger.
Detective
And that was the last time you saw her, correct?
Amirah hesitated to answer at first. A quick, sudden flashback shows us Amirah witnessing Clemence and Lia making love whilst she masturbates outside. Back in the interrogation room, Amirah gives her answer.
Amirah
… yes, nobody has seen her since.
Detective
This stranger, you’re positive this is a stranger to Clemence?
Amirah
Clemence told me everything all the time, she never once mentioned this woman before.
Detective (Pulls out sheet)
I see that you’ve already had a meeting with our sketch artist, this is what the woman looks like?
Amirah is handed a sketch of the woman she saw with Clemence. We have a quick flashback to Amirah watching Clemence making love to the suspect, LIA. Returning to the interrogation room, Amirah shudders upon looking at the sketch.
Amirah
That’s her, that’s the one.
Detective
… see, the problem, Miss Adara, is that we simply can’t find a match for this woman. Those who closely resemble this woman all have proven alibis. Are you certain this sketch is accurate or do we need to-
Amirah (Angry)
Yes! It is! You all look at me like I’m fucking crazy! This is the woman who took Clemence from me!
Cut to:
Ext. Police Station - Day
The credits roll as Amirah exits the station, nearing the verge of tears. She composes herself and begins to walk home.
Cut to:
Ext. Street - Day
As Amirah is walking down the street, she comes to a stop with a worried look. She turns around. Nobody’s there. With no one around, Amirah carries on walking.
Cut to:
Ext. Front Door - Day
Amirah turns towards a house on the street. Approaching a front door, she takes her keys out of her pocket before accidentally dropping them to the ground. When Amirah bends down to pick the keys off the ground, we see a woman in the distance watching Amirah. Whilst it’s hard to make out, the woman appears to have dark skin, black hair and wearing a green trench coat. The spitting image of Lia.
Amirah rises from the ground before a fearful expression grows on her face as if she knew she was being watched. She twists her head around. The watchful woman was gone. Scared for her safety, Amirah unlocks the door and barges into the house.
Cut to:
Int. Living Room - Day
VERONICA is in the living room performing an intense workout on the floor, following a video guide on the TV. Wearing a sports bra and gym shorts, Veronica is covered in sweat from her exercising. She hears the front door open and looks up from her workout position towards the hallway.
Veronica (Breathless)
Hey, how was you’re-
Amirah storms past the living room, racing up the stairs without acknowledging Veronica. Rising up onto her feet and pausing the TV, Veronica looks up at the ceiling with a sorrowful expression.
Cut to:
Int. Amirah’s Bedroom - Day
Amirah is in her bed, curled up in a ball, crying. We hear a knock on her door before Veronica enters the room.
Veronica (Soft voice)
Hey. I take that it didn’t go well?
Amirah (Crying)
Nobody believes me! The police aren’t doing anything and I can’t stop thinking about what I saw! It’s like a nightmare playing over and over again in my head!
Veronica perches herself next to Amirah on the bed. She holds Amirah’s hands as a sign of comfort. Veronica looks deeply into her eyes.
Veronica (Affirming)
Listen to me, I believe in you. We’ve been roommates for years, a friend of yours is a friend of mine. I promise you we’ll both find this monster who took Clemence. But to do that, you need to rest. The stress and pressure you’re putting on yourself, it’s breaking you down. All I’m asking is for you to recover and we’ll find this woman together.
Amirah wipes away the tears in her eyes.
Amirah (Emotional)
Okay. Okay I will. I really needed to hear that, thank you Veronica.
The two smile at one another before going in for a hug. When they let go, Amirah gets closer to Veronica’s face. Veronica slightly backs away.
Amirah
I’m… I’m sorry I… I don’t know what I was thinking and-
Veronica (Brushes it off)
Hey, it’s alright, don’t worry about it.
Veronica does what she can to change the mood.
Veronica (High-toned)
Say, I’m quite stinky at the moment so I’m gonna take a shower. Take a nap for a bit and if you need anything, just let me know, okay?
Amirah nods her head as Veronica leaves the room. Her head falls into her hands, regretting her approach with Veronica.