I really liked the Video. But there are a view things which could be improved in my opinion:
It seems there is a great thought put into lightning, Camere Angles and Field of deepth. But sometimes we can see a raditor in the backround or
a lamp. I think this could be avoided by either covering them or put a black canvas inbetween.
Regarding the Scenes the shoots/scenes are all good but sometimes I am missing some continuity between them. For example the jump at around 4 minuits. They pass out and the next scene/Cut starts already where they are penetrated. Or at 11 minuite.
In the other hand there are some logical transitions. E.g. at arround 7 minuits with a direct tranistion or at 14.20 even there was a cut on the new scene there is a small intro so we know or can asume how they got there. Also the cut at 9.20 i think is okay.
at the begining i was a bit confused. First they get their pussy lubed by the tantacle and then chocked out? I would have prefered the chocking at the beginning with them fully tressed and the tantacles maybee coming from the ceeling So we would "know" how they got in the situation they where chocked uncontiouss and wake up nude. Also i think 7.09 would have been a creat starting scene they wake up in this position and one girl suddenly gets ppentrated from behind without warning and the other sees the big tentacle coming out of her mouth. (Really like this scene). Or also liked the final sceene i think it would also a good starting scene so at the begining they wake up and are taken at surprise and without warning. I think the frightend scene would fit more in the middle. This would be option one. They are frightend because they now know what is going to happen. Another option for the middle part would be that they liked the first time so much taht they are willingly spreading it in order to "embrace" the tantacles.
So its not only about the single Scenes but also about the transition and the Build up of it.
It seems there is a great thought put into lightning, Camere Angles and Field of deepth. But sometimes we can see a raditor in the backround or
a lamp. I think this could be avoided by either covering them or put a black canvas inbetween.
Regarding the Scenes the shoots/scenes are all good but sometimes I am missing some continuity between them. For example the jump at around 4 minuits. They pass out and the next scene/Cut starts already where they are penetrated. Or at 11 minuite.
In the other hand there are some logical transitions. E.g. at arround 7 minuits with a direct tranistion or at 14.20 even there was a cut on the new scene there is a small intro so we know or can asume how they got there. Also the cut at 9.20 i think is okay.
at the begining i was a bit confused. First they get their pussy lubed by the tantacle and then chocked out? I would have prefered the chocking at the beginning with them fully tressed and the tantacles maybee coming from the ceeling So we would "know" how they got in the situation they where chocked uncontiouss and wake up nude. Also i think 7.09 would have been a creat starting scene they wake up in this position and one girl suddenly gets ppentrated from behind without warning and the other sees the big tentacle coming out of her mouth. (Really like this scene). Or also liked the final sceene i think it would also a good starting scene so at the begining they wake up and are taken at surprise and without warning. I think the frightend scene would fit more in the middle. This would be option one. They are frightend because they now know what is going to happen. Another option for the middle part would be that they liked the first time so much taht they are willingly spreading it in order to "embrace" the tantacles.
So its not only about the single Scenes but also about the transition and the Build up of it.