Detention Forever

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Ever since I watched Midnight Lessons it sparked some ideas for things happening after hours at the same school, kind of like an anthology or series with some connected characters. Here's one of those ideas.

So two students are stuck in the school library after hours to serve detention. One is a more tough and sarcastic rebellious girl while the other is more a bit stuck up preppy and honor role material. They share a table, Preppy Girl has homework out while Rebellious Girl plays with a knife under the table carving.

REBELLIOUS GIRL
What are you in for?

PREPPY GIRL
If you must know, I was framed. It's all someone's
poor attempt at ruining my reputation.

REBELLIOUS GIRL
Right.

PREPPY GIRL
No really. They don't want me to get
valedictorian! Can you believe it?

REBELLIOUS GIRL
Nope.

Preppy Girl just now realizes Rebellious Girl is carving her initials into the table.

PREPPY GIRL
Ah! You're defacing school property!

REBELLIOUS GIRL
So?

PREPPY GIRL
Well I can see why you're in here.

REBELLIOUS GIRL
Fuck no. I was framed too.

PREPPY GIRL
Yeah, sure. I bet.

REBELLIOUS GIRL
You're so judgy! You're all the same!
You think I'm a delinquent!

PREPPY GIRL
Look. How about we keep our voices down.
I really don't want to be any more trouble.

REBELLIOUS GIRL
Whatever, ass kisser.

Preppy Girl sighs, she sees some missing posters nearby. One for Melody Marks' and Natasha Nice's characters from Midnight Lessons.

PREPPY GIRL
Things have gotten so weird around here lately.

REBELLIOUS GIRL
You hear what everyone says about them?
They were having an affair and ran off together.

Preppy Girl shudders and shakes her head.


REBELLIOUS GIRL
Fucked each others' brains out!

She sticks her tongue out between her fingers. Preppy Girl moves her chair away from her.

PREPPY GIRL
Neither one of them were lesbians! I would
know I was one of her best friends!

REBELLIOUS GIRL
I think it's pretty badass. Mrs.Ballister's huge titties
in her face like...

She mimics motorboating, Preppy Girl is disgusted.

PREPPY GIRL
That's so inappropriate!

REBELLIOUS GIRL
Hey, I wouldn't knock it. You saying if you had
a chance with a teacher or older woman
you'd turn them down?

PREPPY GIRL
Yes! It's wrong!

 

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A book slams down on the table, getting both girls' attention.

It's the librarian, Miss Johnson.

MISS JOHNSON
Girls, I can hear you both from the other end
of the room. What seems to be the problem?

Both Preppy Girl and Rebellious Girl look at each other and hesitate.

PREPPY GIRL & REBELLIOUS GIRL
Nothing.

MISS JOHNSON
Well, I have a lot of work I need to be doing right
now so unless you'd like to help I suggest you
keep quiet and do your assignments.

PREPPY GIRL
Yes, Miss Johnson.

Miss Johnson leaves them, Rebellious Girl watches the sexy librarian's hips sway.

REBELLIOUS GIRL
I see you checking out her ass.

PREPPY GIRL
I wasn't checking out her ass!

MISS JOHNSON
LADIES!!

Preppy Girl and Rebellious Girl stop bickering and do their work.

BACK OF LIBRARY:

Miss Johnson is organizing some stacks of books. The parasite goes unnoticed by her as it slithers behind a big stack.

FRONT OF LIBRARY:

Rebellious Girl continues teasing Preppy Girl when the power goes out suddenly.

BACK OF LIBRARY:

Miss Johnson is stuck in the dark as she checks the inside cover of a book.

MISS JOHNSON
What the...Ladies? What's going on?
Just stay right there!

She places the book down and reaches for what she thinks is her phone.

MISS JOHNSON(CONT'D)
I swear these kids are going to be the end
of me...

She brings up the parasite close to her face, realizing too late that it isn't her phone! She screams, allowing the parasite perfect access into her mouth.

FRONT OF LIBRARY:

Rebellious Girl collects her things and prepares to make a run for it.

PREPPY GIRL
What do you think you're doing? You can't
just leave!

 

[BeObscene]

REBELLIOUS GIRL
Watch me!

Preppy Girl stands there in the dark alone holding herself.

PREPPY GIRL
Miss Johnson?

Rebellious Girl finds the doors to the library locked. Confused and scared she keeps pushing on them. She hears some rattling in the dark. A now parasited Miss Johnson comes out of the shadows rattling a ring of keys.

MISS JOHNSON
Where do you think you're going,
young lady?

Rebellious Girl sees right away how messed up she looks and runs for it. A chase would ensue between the aisles of books. She returns to Preppy Girl.

PREPPY GIRL
What's going on?

REBELLIOUS GIRL
THAT!!!

Preppy Girl looks back to see a naked Miss Johnson running towards them. Rebellious Girl grabs onto her and the two bolt trying to find a way out of the library. Eventully Rebellious Girl would get cornered and Miss Johnson would tease and play with her before finally parasiting her. It could even be the case where maybe Rebellious Girl slips and falls and Preppy Girl has a chance to help her but instead watches her get pulled away by Miss Johnson.


Preppy Girl would try to hide and hear the two getting it on, the parasite fully taking them over and turning them into mindless sex freaks. She could even hear them both calling to her to add to the creepy tension.


Preppy Girl finds a vent she might be able to crawl through but before she even can she gets ganged up on by Miss Jonson and Rebellious Girl, both taunt her and say how much she's just going to love it. Rebellious Girl would even mimic motorboating like she did before.

Preppy Girl endures them ripping her out of her clothes and Rebellious Girl Putting the parasite in her pussy.



Preppy Girl transforms and Miss Johnson has her way with her first. Rebellious Girl would see her kiss Miss Johnson's ass and playfully call her 'Ass kisser' like earlier and when Miss Johnson shoves Preppy Girl's face between her breasts, Rebellious Girl would once again mimic motorboating with her tongue out, mocking preppy girl, she would even hop with glee.


Preppy Girl would be so overcome with pleasure she allows Rebellious Girl to do whatever she wants to her.
Miss Johnson shows how proud she is of them by squirting all over them both to claim them as hers and shares a passionate kiss exchanging fluids.
"You both belong to me now! FOREVER!"



The whole thing could end with a final frame showing three new missing posters for Miss Johnson and the two girls.
What do you think? Could work as an epic two parter as well.