When the examination goes wrong!

CaptnNemo

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Hey Mates,



Great to have this forum here to share own ideas. As big fan of the older video, while being impressed by the new possibilities, I share my first idea combining the sexual tension from the older videos with the cool new props and locations you have. This detailed script uses some aspects of several videos like the colleague, fille up, the Arcade Game series, the jiology lab series, feeding, parasite twins, and others.

It would be cool if you could consider this script or take at least some aspects. I think this could be a feature video or if necessary, a crowdfunding one. However, I predominantly used some ideas and props that have already been seen on your site.



For you to get already a rough idea, I would like to summarize the script as followed:

An alien spaceship crash landed on earth. The pilot is taken by a governmental organization to examine him. We see a nurse (please Alya, she is so hot!) in a lab (Gynvasion) investigating a tentacle and handling with test tubes to analyse alien sperm. One glass crash on the ground and an aerosol is evaporating and filling the room. The girl wants to escape, but the room is sealed. By inhaling the aerosol the girl gets aroused and she flirts with the camera (the colleague of her in a surveillance room). She gets more and more aroused, starts to strip, and touches herself ending in masturbating. She keeps eye contact with the cam and the scenery gets hotter. Suddenly, she uses a kind of remote control to unlock the box where she stored the alien tentacle in. After a few moments a facehugger with a tentacle comes out and the fucking starts: foreplay: touching, food job, and blow job, Main part: missionary fucking, all the way through, cumflation, and cum bath. The girl exhausted felt asleep and the facehugger retreats. The girl awakes and “sober” again, she feels ashamed looking into the cam. She cleans her up trying to keep her private parts away from the (surveillance) cam. She puts a bathrobe or patients robe on. After some seconds she gets some gastric spasms. She also starts to transform into a kind of human/alien (just some gentle, little body paint) and she is in heat now. She moves to the quarantine zone of the alien (dark room). She is somewhat wild, full of hormones and wants to arouse the alien (and the guys watching her…). The alien gets her attention, and they have a kind of sexfight: oral ending in a mouth-to-ass all the way through, then vaginal penetration in several positions. While the alien is fucking her, she also touches the tentacle with her hands. The position of the girl changes a lot during this “fight”. Finally, the alien “wins” keeping her steady with his other tentacles and fucking her doggy style. After a cumflation, the girl felts asleep again covered with cum. Later we see her on her knees laying several eggs. In the final scene she kneels in a separate cell her skin is now in an alien colour protecting her eggs. Another girl entering the cell feeding the alien girl with Sperm and trying to steal an egg. We fade out and just hear a scream from the other girl. END?



I worked out a detailed screen plan in the later posts.

@Romero and team:

Could you give please brief feedback, if you like the script and if so if it hits the direction, you would like to develop your site?

@all:

Please leave a like or a comment if you like the video and if you would support its making or not. Any criticism or counterproposals are welcome!

Enjoy the details below!



Sincerely,

Nemo, Captain of the Nautilus
 

CaptnNemo

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Background:

The idea is to integrate us as viewer into the scene like in “the colleague”. It plays in a secret governmental installation to investigate alien life. The installation is called Area 30 (or in Roman numbers: Area XXX). The viewer is the chief scientist working from a remote surveillance room supervising the assistants. The chief scientist is romanticising his (or her?) new assistant. The assistant is also attracted to the chief scientist. However, she wants the chief scientist to find the way to her heart. She is sending signals and gently flirts with her boss, but the chief scientist, as nerd😊, can`t fully interpret her signals. So, for both of them it`s a non-satisfying situation.

Concerning the protagonist/the assistant: The girl should be somewhat cool, at a distance, but at the same time, she should be nearable and flirting (not arrogant like Sasha Rose in bedtime). She should have a good portion of self-esteem and should not give in too easily – not like Eve Sweet.

I like small natural breasts, a sportive to slim body, a beautiful fully shaved/waxed pussy with small labia, and dark (brown to black hair).

My personal favourite girls, I can Imagine in the scene are:

1. Alya Stark! With a big distance to the others. I`m a big fan of her.

2. Yukki Amey. Her filled-up scene is the best you produced so far!!!

3. Milena Ray. She has the most perfect body. Not sure about her performance yet, the video she started in was a “doll video”

4. Mary Bambola. Hot body!

5. Stefany Kyler. Hot girl, her face could be smoother. However, she might well suit the story.

6. Marilyn Sugar. The blonde exception!

Some other girls, looking hot, who haven`t debuted on Hentaied:

Akira May, Adriana Shine, Serena Wood, Milana, Renata Fox, and Sheri Vi.

Anyhow, maybe you have another girl in mind fitting perfectly to the story.



The rooms.

The first part plays in the gyno-exam-room from “Gynvasion” with an additional desk and equipment from the jiology lab scenes.

Props: When I speak of the new tentacle, I think of the ones from Cum-Dinner. When I speak of the old tentacles, I speak of the first ones from e.g., the colleague.

The second part plays in the dark room with some props to illustrate a kind of quarantine cell for aliens. With a glass door (sliding door for a shower or something) and a metallic wall in the background.
 

CaptnNemo

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Prologue: The Alien Lab

We fade in and see a picture of the Alien Spaceship from “Up in the sky”. The picture is blurry to look like taken from an amateur. The rest of the screen looks like from a news channel. A moving breaking news line in the lower part of the screens says: Breaking news: alien spaceship crash landed on earth – pilot missing. Escaped or taken? Fade in and out. We see the girl (I hope Alya) in her sexy nurse outfit maybe nice heigh heels instead of the boots? It looks more professional and high heels can be stripped off easier. She is in the gyno room from the video “gynvasion”. A working desk with some devices from Jia`s Jiology lab is in the room. She carries some test glasses to the desk. She speaks to a recording device: “Research assistant Stark. May 4th , alien pilot sperm sample analyses”. We see a small glass box with a lock on it. She opens the lock and takes one tentacle (The new one from Cum Dinner) out of the box. She is taking the head of the tentacle in her right hand, and she uses her thumb to massage the point on the tentacle where the tentacle opens towards the red spot (it looks like a clit hood). After a while of rubbing this point using rotating movements of her thumb some sperm is coming out of the tentacle. She uses a small glass to capture the sperm. She puts the tentacle back in the box. Now, she fills the test glasses she brought earlier using a dropping glass with sperm. After each glass is filled, she adds different reagents to the glasses. She realizes that somebody is watching her. She looks into the camera. The camera should be using an angle that gives the impression she is watched via a surveillance cam. She speaks to the cam: “hey buddy, you`re late as usual.” She waves a kiss to the cam and continues to work. We see some shots of her beautiful body and she gently flirts with us. Moving her legs exposing a bit of her upper legs, but still not more. She starts to shake one sample glass and she didn`t pay attention to it and it crashes on the ground. The glass evaporates a kind of steam/aerosol. A voice says: “Danger! Unknown aerosol detected. Initiate quarantine”. We see yellow flashes form the lamps (but we don`t see the lamps themselves). She gets panicked and moves to the exit door looking up in the camera in panic while the room fills with steam. Fade in and out
 

CaptnNemo

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Part 1: Seducing you, seducing me, seducing him…

She inhaled the aerosol, which includes a strong pheromone/aphrodisiac. She sits on the bed (like in the colleague) and looks into the camera. She starts flirting with us. (Here you can use a lot form the colleague vid). First looking in the cam fully aroused (~0:25 secs of the vid), we see her full body still in her outfit kneeling on the bed (1:05 sec), the flirting can be just like the first 2:50 of the original video – it is so hot!!! We skip to the small box with the tentacle in and the tentacle seems to get alive. The box jumps a bit on the desk. Focusing back on her, she jumps up on the ground and she gently lets her skirt fall on the ground. She strips of her bra and her shoes. She puts her right leg on the bed. This opens her legs, and she continues to masturbate and fingering her pussy. (We again see some liquid dropping from her pussy). She constantly keeps eye contact with the cam arousing us. The box with the alien tentacle is more and more jumping on the desk. Close to her orgasm she suddenly has a small device (a remote control like a garage door opener or something similar) in her hand. She looks deep in the camera and pushes the button. She laughs and the lock at the box opens. A facehugger with a long tentacle is moving out of the box and gently move on the desk`s edge to glide down to the ground.

She jumps on the bed and sits on it: Her hands behind her torso and her legs in front of her. The tentacle (of the face hugger) is approaching on the bed (new tentacles – like in cum dinner). She starts to rub it with her feet. The tentacle stops its motion seeming to enjoy her treatment. She keeps eye contact with the cam, and she gets aroused as well. Touching her nipple and later her clit while continuing the food job. The tentacle comes and cover her feet with sperm. In the spastic, uncontrolled movement of the tentacle she jumps on the bed and turning her face towards the tentacle. She is sitting in doggy style position with her mouth toward the tentacle. She looks into the cam while she takes the tentacle softly in her hands. She starts rubbing it a bit and then moves it to her mouth. She is giving it a blow job. It would be cool if we see her tongue moving and playing with the tentacles (like in the colleague video). We change the surveillance cam and see her from behind. She is on her knees in doggy style her ass up and her torso/head down. We see her pussy and ass and through her legs how she gives a blow job to the tentacle. After a while the tentacle cums. She is overwhelmed by the amount of sperm and needs to cough. She kneels upright with her upper legs resting on her lower legs. She uses her fingers to remove the sperm from her eyes. This distraction is used by the face hugger alien, and he jumps on her face and “hugs it”. Overwhelmed by the move she tries to retreat, and she lays on her back in missionary position. The face hugger is releasing some additional pheromones directly in her nostrils. She gets calm. The face hugger releases his grip and now he is moving his big tentacle towards her pussy. She is shocked a bit. Her play now becomes more serious. She tries to close her pussy by pressing her muscles. She looks into the cam as if asking for help. The tentacle reaches her intimate parts and starts rubbing her clit -because her pussy is still closed. She starts to relax, and the type of sensation is making her hornier and hornier. After a while she opens her pussy and the tentacle fucks her gently. She moans in extasy. The strokes gets harder and harder. She begs for more: “deeper, deeper. Oh , yes deeper”. She realizes that the tentacles are moving into her ovaries (in the play not real of course - Maybe you can illustrate this like in The Arcade Machine Pt2 using CGI?). She feels a bit scared, but another shower of extasy is catching her body and mind. After probing the ovaries, the tentacles continuous its way through her body. Another wave of panic is shocking her. She looks into the cam for help. Small tears drop from her eyes. Suddenly, the extasy is overwhelming her again. We see the tentacle in her body moving (CGI). She starts spitting, she realizes something is moving through her throat. Then the end of the tentacle is exiting her mouth fucking her all the way through. Her panic is gone, she feels not to be hurt and enjoys the ride. The movement of the tentacle is increasing. It cums hard while still the tentacle head outside her mouth covering her belly and body with sperm. After this orgasm the tentacle starts to retreat. After it left her pussy, she moves her ass up (like in the drow elf – (08:08 sec). The face hugger takes this as an invitation and move back on her fucking her a last time. Both come at the same time, the tentacle releasing a lot of sperm in her pussy. The face hugger falls on the ground, while she cream-pies her body (like in the drow elf 9:30 sec) and her body gets covered with sperm. She falls asleep. We fade in and out
 

CaptnNemo

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Interlude: Transformation

She wakes up covered with dried (or drying) sperm. She is somewhat “sober” again and she feels ashamed what happened – especially because we have watched her. She uses some paper towel from a dispenser to clean her up. She tries to cover her intimate areas from our view. She puts a bath robe or a paper suit on. Suddenly she cramps and holds her hands on her belly (like “when the water breaks – 5:18 sec). she pees and when she takes her hands back we see the veins around her navel getting black (same effect like in parasite twins – 6:51 sec). She looks at her fingers. Her fingernails, toenails, lips and nipples get black (black nail paint and lip stick) – like Amirah Adara in a new room mate. She has a bit of a goth, alien outfit. The transformation continuous. Her fingers and toes get black a black line from the nails to the wrists/ankles. On her belly down towards her pussy her veins are black. On her spine is a black line from her ass to her neck. Her clitoral hood (Alya for example really has a prominent and beautiful one!) gets black as well. If you like, her finger and toenails might become black claws (maybe it`s already too much – the intention is to highlight her sexiness and attractiveness not become a wired looking girl!).

These are some ideas for a gentle transformation. The transformation should be in a way that it doesn`t look furry or too alienish, and it should underline her beauty – more like in the drow elf rather then in the feeding video (which is already too much for this stage of story).



During the transformation she gets hornier and hornier. When the transformation is over, she is in a kind of heat. She begs for being impregnated by an alien. She opens the door (it`s not the sealed door it`s the door to the alien contamination cells) and leaves the lab. Fade in and out
 

CaptnNemo

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Part 2: Impregnation

The cell is represented by the dark room. Maybe you can use the walls used in the toilet encounter videos and put a metallic foil on it and use them as the walls in the background. The create a kind of door you could use some acrylic glass walls. Or some glass sliding door set in the room. Like a shower sliding door available at a bath shop.

She approaches this glass door and enters a number code to open it. She slides the door away and opens it. She is standing in the room looking a bit dominantly into the cam (like vale Nappi in Made in Italy – 0:26 sec). Two tentacles are moving upwards and resting on her shoulders. Like a snake girl dancing with a big snake. The tentacles start to leak some sperm on her filling her nostrils with pheromones. The tentacles retreat. But the pheromones take their effect. She gets hornier and less controlled. She slides on her knees, and she starts to crawl on the floor. She exposes her pussy and while moving. She is shaking her hips while the cam is focused on her intimates in full doggy style position. She leaks some liquids (maybe semi-transparent bluish) form her pussy in heat. She turns her head and looks into the camera trying to arouse the possible watcher as if she would say: come on, what you are waiting for fuck me right now”. She continues crawling away from the camera more towards the darkness of the room. Suddenly, a tenacle shoots underneath her and moving upwards between her legs. She fixes her eyes (and head) on the tentacle tip. The tentacle is moving around, toughing her legs, hands, feet, but staying on the ground. Suddenly the tentacle stops between her legs right below her pussy. In this moment she loses greenish, semi-transparent liquid (turning from blueish to greenish is the effect of her being more turned on). The tentacles quickly retreats and two tentacles (the round ones from a bbw Experience – 2:41 sec) shoot forward and catch her by her wrists. The tentacles draw her forward into the room (away from the camera) more into the dark of the room. By this pull she falls on her belly first her legs spread and lower legs up (camera vie like in lobotomy -7:19sec). In this direction you could put a reddish light and some steam. If feasible – we might shortly for a split second see the face of the alien monster from the arcade game series - Gianfranco, I think? – above her. Fade out.

For the now coming sexfight, I propose a stroboscopic effect. The scene should be around 30 -40 s long. You film four separate scenes:

1st: We film her from the side. She is crouches down. Her legs are ready to jump up. In front of her face is a tentacle. She jumps on the tentacle and catches it with his hands.

2nd: We film her from the side a bit form above. She is on her back. There is a tentacle moving above her body. She tries to catch the tentacle by her hands, while moving her legs.

3rd: We film her from the side a bit form below. She stands and holds a tentacle with both of her hands. The tentacle trembles and tries to escape her grip. She spans her arm muscles to give the impression it is a tough task to keep the tentacle.

4th: We film her from the front and from below (we only see either her legs up to her wrists or her upper body from her pussy to her face – cum dinner). The tentacle is fucking her (like in com dinner 4:17 sex).

Now you pick a short part (0.5 to 1 seconds) from one clip put a black or at least dark transition frame and add a short part (again 0.5 to 1 seconds) from another clip. Repeat it until you have 30 to 40 second stroboscopic sex-fight element.

The next scene starts at like the first clip. We film her from the side. She is crouches down at the left side of the screen. Her legs are ready to jump up. In front of her face is a tentacle coming from the right edge of the screen (I think of the old tentacle/maybe a new one . Suddenly, a foreleg (of the alien Gianfranco) appears on the right corner of the screen. Now, the tentacle comes closer to her face. She grabs it by her hands and stops its motion. The tentacle is trying to move on, and we see a kind of strength fight. The tentacle comes a few centimetres, then she succeeds to move it back again. Suddenly, she starts to gently kiss the tip of the tentacle. The tentacle hesitates. She is now kissing again. More kisses! Now she increases the intensity of the kisses. Then, she takes a bigger part (2-3 centimetres) of the tentacle tip in her mouth and gently moves her tongue around the tip. Stepwise, she starts to give the tentacle a blow job. This “awakes” the alien again. The tentacle pushes more toward her mouth. She retreats a bit and moving her torso backwards. She can’t rest on her feet anymore and falls on her butt. She is struggling while the tentacle is more and more pushing going deeper and deeper in her throat. She can`t withstand the ***** of the tentacle and needs to lean backwards leaning on her lower arms. The camera angle is now changing showing her from the front (position like in A full, fresh aheagao explosion 5:53 sec – Alya on the left). The tentacle is now moving deeper and deeper inside her.

We see now, a small tip of the tentacle escaping from her anus. Very gently, moving a bit out and a in again. (Like Made in Italy 2.26 sec). Suddenly two tentacles grab her by her ankles and around her on her belly. She tries to get in a more comfortable position, and she rest on one leg (like in filled up 13:54 sec). We see a close up of her anus opening and closing (Filled up 13:44 sec) then the tentacle “breakes trough”. The blow job /all the way through mouth to ass continuous like in filled up 13:50-14:25. Like in filled up the tentacle moves out stepwise. We skip the DP part from filled up, but therefore the scene is a bit longer, changing camera perspectives. We continue from the filled up video at around 16:15 sec where she starts peeing. This time the liquid is still greenish but a bit less transparent (indicating that she is now ready to be fucked/impregnated). Again, another tentacle gets peed on and it “tastes” the pee. (Camera and sequence like filled up 16:30 sec -17:15 sec).

The same cut like in filled up and we see a similar scene where she lies on her back a bit sleeping. We see her beautiful body and some of the old tentacles moving over her body (filled up: 17:16sec – 18:08 sec). Now the scene is more like Mr. Alien in action (1:35 s – 6:35 s). We see a similar leg spreading, leading to missionary fucking. She is also a bit chocked. However she is looking from time to time directly in the cam, while she got the fuck of her lifetime. Similar like in Mr Alien in action she is later lifting her legs. (But maybe without ahegeao face? Instead, she looks into the cam).

After the cumshot she turns into doggy style position, pretty much like Rae Lil Black in the arcade machine pt2. To generate more tension and to show that something special is happening, we see now a new designed tentacle. The tentacle is much thicker than the new ones. The tip of the tentacle seems to tear open, however it`s a kind of foreskin and while it retreats a big black dildo appears. (like the one from P.A. Job Appliance). She now gets doggy style fucked finishing with a big cumshot and creampie. The scene is like in arcade machine pt.2. However, when in highest arousal she looks in the direction of the alien and then into the cam. When the tentacle retreats and a fountain of sperm is cream pieing her pussy, we see a quick shadow of Gianfranco escaping the room. The is cumflated wit a big belly and she fall on her side holding her belly. Fade in and fade out
 

CaptnNemo

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Epilogue:

We see her see her now fully transformed to an alien with green skin maybe with some bodypaint -like in feeding or like in Brazzers.com Fuck me earthling – the green girl! She is crouching or kneeling, and we see her from her back like in A.I. Love (~8:19). But instead of riding a dildo, we see her laying alien eggs. Fade. Now we see her from the front close to the glassdoor. She is still crouching or kneeling with a full nest of alien eggs covered in slime between her legs. Another assistant (girls) in the same nurse outfit – but this time with the boots- is unlocking the door and entering the quarantine cell. The assistant is holding a dish full of cum/sperm and putting it in front of the alien girl (the ones from cum dinner). The alien is moving on her kneels and craws to the dish -like in cum dinner. She starts to eat the cum like it is her favourite meal full of hunger. While she is eating the other assitant is moving toward the “nest” of eggs and she grabs for one egg taking it out. Fade out! We see only the black screen and the text “The End” fades in. Then, we hear a thrilling scream from the assistant. A question mark appears (The End?). And we fade back to the Hentaied purple. Maybe we see a couple of take outs or so, but it`s not important
 

CaptnNemo

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Hey Mates,

to be honest, I put some time in creating this, especially in finding and describing ways, I think, which can be done with the props available or at least affordable.
DON`T YOU HAVE ANY FEEDBACK ON THIS!
Even If you don`t like it.

Sincerely,
Nemo, Captain of the Nautilus
 

Romero

Professional α Perv
Hey Nemo.
I was not checking the forum, and whoever had the task to ping me to look into stuff didn't. Some head will fall!
I like the idea, and i like the script. Generally, we will need to modify some parts to make it more doable, as there's a lot of things happening.
Working now with the writer to work into this!
 

CaptnNemo

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Hey Nemo.
I was not checking the forum, and whoever had the task to ping me to look into stuff didn't. Some head will fall!
I like the idea, and i like the script. Generally, we will need to modify some parts to make it more doable, as there's a lot of things happening.
Working now with the writer to work into this!
Hey Romero,

Thank you so much for your feedback!(y)
Wow, I dind`t expect that you pick it from the list of so many great ideas.

A Capt`n should be full of mercy to her/his crew🤔. To my taste, with Tiffany enough heads rolled this year🤪

Sure, please do as many adoption you like.
To hit my personal taste, I would just add some wishes, when adopting:
  • The video is inspired from Alya`s "the colleague", so it would be cool, if the new video has a similar mood/flair
  • Eye contact and other tools to integrate the viewer, would make the video a more intense experience -at least for me.
  • Keep the girl protagonist, she acts and her "mistakes/clumsiness" opening the way for the alien not let her just be the "victim"
  • Connect the story to the porn part and let the porn part also tell a story. This would give the whole a great flow.
Just a little feedback on "The Arcade Machine Pt2". Here the story and the porn part didn`t match in my eyes. Rea is allying with aliens and the alien nearly r*pes her? I think, either the first interaction is way more consensual or forget about allying with aliens. Instead of showing "no friendly fire" you should have displayed "out of ammo". She desperately tries to shoot, but nothing is happening just the alien is coming closer and closer.
What do you think?

Thanks again and have a great Sunday!

Sincerely,
Nemo, Captain of the Nautilus
 

CaptnNemo

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Hey mates,

after reading about the new prop of a suction cup tentacle ( https://forum.hentaied.com/index.php?threads/suction-cups.297/). It would be cool if you could add this prop to the final scene?

"Improved version":
After the cumshot she turns into doggy style position, pretty much like Rae Lil Black in the arcade machine pt2. Two new tentacles with suction cups are coming from behind and moving on the ground between her legs. The tentacle stop at the position of her breasts/nipples and start to rise up and start to suck her nipples. The new sensation is increasing her arousal and she moans. After some seconds we see some milk dropping from her nipples (I don`t know if you plan a milk-tunnel in the new prop to simulate *********? It would be a cool asset, right?). The milk flow shows the alien, that the she is really ready to be impregnated. To generate more tension and to show that something special is happening, we see now a new designed tentacle. The tentacle is much thicker than the new ones. The tip of the tentacle seems to tear open, however it`s a kind of foreskin and while it retreats a big black dildo appears. (like the one from P.A. Job Appliance). She now gets doggy style fucked. The sucking tentacle are still working her nipples. The intenser the fucking goes, also the sucking gets heavier and she gets one after another orgasm. For the final climax, the sucking cup tentacles leave with a big lake of milk on the floor. The fucking reaches its last climax finishing with a big cumshot and creampie. The scene is like in arcade machine pt.2. However, when in highest arousal she looks in the direction of the alien and then into the cam. When the tentacle retreats and a fountain of sperm is cream pieing her pussy, we see a quick shadow of Gianfranco escaping the room. The is cumflated wit a big belly and she fall on her side holding her belly. Fade in and fade out


I think it might be a nice add on? What do you think?

Thanks again and have a great Saturday!

Sincerely,
Nemo, Captain of the Nautilus
 
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