Inspiration from the older videos?

CaptnNemo

New member
Hey Mates,



okay, I`m pretty much new here at the forum, while I`m subscribing already some time.

What you, Romero, and your team has built up is amazing.

From an objective standpoint the videos get better and better. I love the new tentacles; they look so real. The little stories are opening to a large world of Hentaied. The idea and storytelling of the arcade game reaches a new level, great. Also, the props and new location are amazing.

Unfortunately, these new videos are less and less touchy and I start to prefer the older ones far more. I wondered why and tried to find categories what are the new vids “missing” to reach me. So, I would like to give you feedback and to discuss with others here if my perception and wishes are just mine or if others are also thinking like me.

Here are the categories:

GIRL ARE NO DOLLS: Obvious, however the new scenes often use the same scheme. The girls are choked by tentacles, nearly get unconscious, and finally the tentacles do what they want with the girl. Sorry guys but this is BORING for me! Let the girls have a “sex fight” with the Alien/tentacles. The tentacles need to “conquer” the girl. I like the element where Amy is “Closing” her holes with her muscles and the tentacle needs to convince her a bit. Anyhow, having the girls as protagonist and the tentacles as antagonists is opening a lot of possibilities to create a scene with a lot of sexual tension.



EYE CONTACT: Direct eye contact with the Camera (=us as watcher) makes the scene more intimate. You just feel like the girl starts to connect with you, flirts with you. Just look at Vale Nappi for example the start of Made in Italy is amazing! Alya Stark! Look how she touches you through the camera in “the colleague”!


AMBIENCE: The new videos are somewhat perfect. They feel like clean and industrial mass production. They feel like gymnastics rather than sex. Try to put more emotion in it. Also, the black room is not ideal; add more props to give the dark room a kind of ambience. If the dark room is a dungeon, then just add a stone wall wallpaper in the background or something like that. Also add more “dirt”. Let the girls be dirty, when it fits to the story (like in the dropouts’ series – this body paint is just amazing).


STORY: Finally, please work on story telling. The typical stories are separated in two main parts. The casual, narrative part – which can span already half of the video – and the porn part. Both parts feel like they are developed by different persons. Especially, with the dark room scenes the first part is very much exchangeable, and the porn part is very much like other videos. In my eyes, a “perfect” story should have a quick narrative part, a foreplay transition, and a main sex part. All three parts should be individual and unique for each video and not taking the porn part out of a repeating repertoire.

Sorry, for my direct way of criticism, However, I like to be constructive and wrote my own story based on elements from my favourites´ videos. I shared my script in the script section, please find here:


Thank you in advance for considering my feedback.

I`m looking forward to any discussion!

Sincerely,

Nemo, Captain of the Nautilus
 

Romero

Professional α Perv
Hey Nemo,

Thanks for the feedback.
I've many question marks about the first point.
If the girl doesn't get tied up / choked or whatever restriction, she should be able to escape / fight against the tentacles.
Which - is pretty impossible to do because of the tentacles limitations, we have no way to keep them on a girl, moving with a girl fighting back, it will look like a comedy Z-movie.
So at this moment we are keeping that part stable and untouched, till we have better ideas on this topic, or the chance to do CGI tentacles in this fashion (Which is incredibly expensive and out of budget).
About the eye contact, i'm on it, noted.
About the ambience, that's a hard part - but we are on it. The new studio should be opened in the next months, as soon as we have that running, we are gonna have more possibilities for sure.
 

CaptnNemo

New member
Hey Nemo,

Thanks for the feedback.
I've many question marks about the first point.
If the girl doesn't get tied up / choked or whatever restriction, she should be able to escape / fight against the tentacles.
Which - is pretty impossible to do because of the tentacles limitations, we have no way to keep them on a girl, moving with a girl fighting back, it will look like a comedy Z-movie.
So at this moment we are keeping that part stable and untouched, till we have better ideas on this topic, or the chance to do CGI tentacles in this fashion (Which is incredibly expensive and out of budget).
About the eye contact, i'm on it, noted.
About the ambience, that's a hard part - but we are on it. The new studio should be opened in the next months, as soon as we have that running, we are gonna have more possibilities for sure.
Hey Romero,

thank you for your response and considering my feedback.
To the first point:
Don´t get me wrong the choking idea is not too bad. It`s just too much repeating. Some ideas (I hope possible ones) to get more variability:
  • I like a trap idea. So it`s a bit the girl`s fault (curiosity or clumsiness) she gets into the situation:
    • She finds a tentacle on the ground. She lifts it and gets aroused by the touch
    • She touches a flower and some spores with aphrodisiac effects makes her horny on aliens
    • (...) I don`t know, there are a lot of examples in Sci-Fi (horror)movies like the facehugger attack in Alien
  • Maybe she becomes just a lover to an Alien. First she is shy and then gets more and more addicted to the alien and finally fucks him (more a psycho story)
  • I like the Violet and Blue idea, please more consensual elements again!
  • Make a lesbian video. Both girls like BDSM and one girl is fixing her friend to a St Andrew`s cross, blind folds her and then let the alien fuck her...
  • A girl is so shocked, when seeing the alien. She can`t move and the alien tentacles are touching her body then she likes it.
It might sound not hot, however the thing is about creating the mood of the scenery and a nice story connected to the porn scene.
You already read my idea, how it might work in the story. This highlights the way I think about it.
I thinks it`s more about variation of different moods and feelings to make your site more interesting 🤔

Have a great Sunday!
Thank you again.

Sincerely,


Nemo, Captain of the Nautilus
 

OldPervert

New member
As I wrote in my standalone post, I would prefer more consensual intimate erotic content too.
The visuals of the new productions are amazing, but the stories are too flat and boring.

Why do tentacles always have to fight or ***** actions?
It must be possible to create a scene, where the girl wants to be seduced by the creature, enjoying it instead of being used like a doll.
Nothing to say against a little "encouragement" from the creature, this seems natural due to the weirdness of the situation.

The movies "The Untamed", "The Sitter" and "Harvest Lake" did a good job here.
Watch these as an inspiration.

There should be a believable storyline.
  • Where do the tentacles/creatures come from, why are they here?
  • Is the creature evil, friendly or just different?
  • The scenery should be believable and as much as possible somehow realistic.
  • Keep the scenery simple, don´t put too much in a short scene.
If the girl is raped, than it is unlikely and shouldn´t be presented as she´s enjoying it!
This is a very critical part, which has to be explained in a believable way, especially in the western culture!

And please stop or reduce this anatomical bullshit like "all the way through a girl", tentacles coming out of body holes and the annoying mass usage of fluids pumped into the bodies and coming out again.
 
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