Hey Mates,
okay, I`m pretty much new here at the forum, while I`m subscribing already some time.
What you, Romero, and your team has built up is amazing.
From an objective standpoint the videos get better and better. I love the new tentacles; they look so real. The little stories are opening to a large world of Hentaied. The idea and storytelling of the arcade game reaches a new level, great. Also, the props and new location are amazing.
Unfortunately, these new videos are less and less touchy and I start to prefer the older ones far more. I wondered why and tried to find categories what are the new vids “missing” to reach me. So, I would like to give you feedback and to discuss with others here if my perception and wishes are just mine or if others are also thinking like me.
Here are the categories:
GIRL ARE NO DOLLS: Obvious, however the new scenes often use the same scheme. The girls are choked by tentacles, nearly get unconscious, and finally the tentacles do what they want with the girl. Sorry guys but this is BORING for me! Let the girls have a “sex fight” with the Alien/tentacles. The tentacles need to “conquer” the girl. I like the element where Amy is “Closing” her holes with her muscles and the tentacle needs to convince her a bit. Anyhow, having the girls as protagonist and the tentacles as antagonists is opening a lot of possibilities to create a scene with a lot of sexual tension.
EYE CONTACT: Direct eye contact with the Camera (=us as watcher) makes the scene more intimate. You just feel like the girl starts to connect with you, flirts with you. Just look at Vale Nappi for example the start of Made in Italy is amazing! Alya Stark! Look how she touches you through the camera in “the colleague”!
AMBIENCE: The new videos are somewhat perfect. They feel like clean and industrial mass production. They feel like gymnastics rather than sex. Try to put more emotion in it. Also, the black room is not ideal; add more props to give the dark room a kind of ambience. If the dark room is a dungeon, then just add a stone wall wallpaper in the background or something like that. Also add more “dirt”. Let the girls be dirty, when it fits to the story (like in the dropouts’ series – this body paint is just amazing).
STORY: Finally, please work on story telling. The typical stories are separated in two main parts. The casual, narrative part – which can span already half of the video – and the porn part. Both parts feel like they are developed by different persons. Especially, with the dark room scenes the first part is very much exchangeable, and the porn part is very much like other videos. In my eyes, a “perfect” story should have a quick narrative part, a foreplay transition, and a main sex part. All three parts should be individual and unique for each video and not taking the porn part out of a repeating repertoire.
Sorry, for my direct way of criticism, However, I like to be constructive and wrote my own story based on elements from my favourites´ videos. I shared my script in the script section, please find here:
Thank you in advance for considering my feedback.
I`m looking forward to any discussion!
Sincerely,
Nemo, Captain of the Nautilus
okay, I`m pretty much new here at the forum, while I`m subscribing already some time.
What you, Romero, and your team has built up is amazing.
From an objective standpoint the videos get better and better. I love the new tentacles; they look so real. The little stories are opening to a large world of Hentaied. The idea and storytelling of the arcade game reaches a new level, great. Also, the props and new location are amazing.
Unfortunately, these new videos are less and less touchy and I start to prefer the older ones far more. I wondered why and tried to find categories what are the new vids “missing” to reach me. So, I would like to give you feedback and to discuss with others here if my perception and wishes are just mine or if others are also thinking like me.
Here are the categories:
GIRL ARE NO DOLLS: Obvious, however the new scenes often use the same scheme. The girls are choked by tentacles, nearly get unconscious, and finally the tentacles do what they want with the girl. Sorry guys but this is BORING for me! Let the girls have a “sex fight” with the Alien/tentacles. The tentacles need to “conquer” the girl. I like the element where Amy is “Closing” her holes with her muscles and the tentacle needs to convince her a bit. Anyhow, having the girls as protagonist and the tentacles as antagonists is opening a lot of possibilities to create a scene with a lot of sexual tension.
EYE CONTACT: Direct eye contact with the Camera (=us as watcher) makes the scene more intimate. You just feel like the girl starts to connect with you, flirts with you. Just look at Vale Nappi for example the start of Made in Italy is amazing! Alya Stark! Look how she touches you through the camera in “the colleague”!
AMBIENCE: The new videos are somewhat perfect. They feel like clean and industrial mass production. They feel like gymnastics rather than sex. Try to put more emotion in it. Also, the black room is not ideal; add more props to give the dark room a kind of ambience. If the dark room is a dungeon, then just add a stone wall wallpaper in the background or something like that. Also add more “dirt”. Let the girls be dirty, when it fits to the story (like in the dropouts’ series – this body paint is just amazing).
STORY: Finally, please work on story telling. The typical stories are separated in two main parts. The casual, narrative part – which can span already half of the video – and the porn part. Both parts feel like they are developed by different persons. Especially, with the dark room scenes the first part is very much exchangeable, and the porn part is very much like other videos. In my eyes, a “perfect” story should have a quick narrative part, a foreplay transition, and a main sex part. All three parts should be individual and unique for each video and not taking the porn part out of a repeating repertoire.
Sorry, for my direct way of criticism, However, I like to be constructive and wrote my own story based on elements from my favourites´ videos. I shared my script in the script section, please find here:
When the examination goes wrong!
Hey Mates, Great to have this forum here to share own ideas. As big fan of the older video, while being impressed by the new possibilities, I share my first idea combining the sexual tension from the older videos with the cool new props and locations you have. This detailed script uses some...
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Thank you in advance for considering my feedback.
I`m looking forward to any discussion!
Sincerely,
Nemo, Captain of the Nautilus