From Cunt Till Mouth 2

CoWHentaied

Member
Girl: 7.5/10: OMG … very nice! I really liked her expressions and she really gave the feeling experiencing it and I think she is a very good choice for further projects. She also expressed the feeling when she got “more to handle” .. very nice!

Story: 2.5/10: 2.5 are for the first minutes.. And I think this video would have been improved by 300% just sticking to it and continuing right at the setting where it started.

Effects: 7/10: not much needed here but its fine with me :)

Props: Please stop using that tentacles for action scenes. (smaller diameter at the end and slowly increasing over 1-2 foot till its full diameter) Because of its shape it defines how deep it is in and we clearly can see it. And if you wanna suggest the tentacle is in the process of going through the body and just the tip of the tentacle is in her .. it just don’t makes sense! (use more unique diameter tentatcles like in cum dinner)

Music/Sound 6/10: was there music? I didn’t noticed anything wrong …so it has to be good!

Plot: 3/10: I did like the undressing of the tentacles very much!.. but in this video are many inconsistencies:
  • See props
  • It don’t really makes sense to me why she was taken into the “cave” .. dreaming?
  • From 3 Tentacles fucking her .. a second later its just one .. ?
  • Splattering cum over her .. why? Wouldn’t it be nice to see her wanna swallow some after she is sexual pleasured [after some research… lol.. reading the video description.. that was the bukkake part.. so its ok but still making no sense to me! The goal of the bukkake is to make the girl horny and I don’t see any approach!
  • I love the full view diagonal view over the screen of the girl but its hard to see what she feels (fully inserted – we hear it but we cant see it!)
The tying up was very well executed!

Conclusion: All in all its hard to decide. I did watch it from start to beginning which is a good indicator.. and the video (and girl!!!!) has some great potential. But here it’s a better girl with a not so good executed scenery. Besides the fact of the uniqueness of the tentacle the shape destroys all indicated actions.

All in All: 3.5/10 :rolleyes:
To rate this video, I re-use Lostarions 10 stars extended rating (6 = art; 7 = fine art; 8 = extreme fine art; 9 = near perfect; 10 = perfect).
 

Lostarion

Moderator
Staff member
Thank`s CoWHentaied for the first review.
Here is my impressions and review to the video:

Girl: 9/10: Great! Stacy Cruz. She played amazingly. The fear in her eyes/face fells real. She is beautiful. I bit more “womanish” than the usual girls; I really love this contrast.

Story: 9/10: The background story is great. I like the start in a normal life scene. It is always a great starting point for increasing the tension.

Effects: 5/10: The effects were very “standard”. I didn`t see anything new.

Props: 7/10: I like the idea of setting it up in the living room to start the video. The dark room setting is solid and does its job well. Nothing special, but also nothing to complain.

Music 3/10: There was no music, except from the horror movie she was watching. The sound effects and her moaning were okay, nothing special.

Plot: 7/10: The plot idea is so great. A girl watching a horror movie (at least I would guess it) landing herself in a horror movie, top. The fear and emotions of the girl are a captured so amazingly. Here we see the big potential of the new director. He has the right feeling to capture the emotion of the girl. Either via close-up facial shots without eye-contact; sometimes with full body shots and the eyes moving quickly from left to right. Top! I love how the alien is ripping off the cloth of the girl. The sex scene is solid, however a bit boring to mediocris. The start is great with the ripping of the cloth a feet close-up and the smooth and soft first tentacle penetration/entry. Stacy plays fantastically; she starts from fear and the wish to get away towards pleasure later. Nevertheless, after the first penetration the sex would have needed more variation to increase and decrease tension. Stacy`s facial expression during the all-the-way-through was played, as she was absent and not into the scene.

Composition: The composition was great. I love the intro. Only a minor weak point was the transition to the darks room.

Director: 8/10: Mark has a very good potential. He has an excellent eye to capture the feelings of Stacy, which give the video some depths. He is great at face shots. He was a bit trying to copy Romero`s style, e.g. with the feet close-ups or the position of the girl sitting on the dark-room`s floor. I would like to see Mark developing his own style a bit more. This would give more directions for Hentaied, which would make the site more interesting.

Alternative Plot lines ideas: I also would like to give an alternative plot line, which I think would have given the video more profile, depth, and a bit more thrill. Only little changes:

Starting point: Stacy opens a box with a blue-ray disc (maybe as a gift from a friend?). The box indicates this is a magical movie or so. She starts watching.

At 1:00 min: The transition to the dark room: Stacy flips her blanket and sees the tentacle. Now the natural behaviour of any human would be Freeze, flight, fight, or fright. In this case I would love to see Stacy jumping up, running to the bathroom, locking up the door and hiding in the tub. We hear the tentacles approaching. They start to knock on the door. The knocking gets louder and louder. Suddenly the light starts to flicker and shuts off. Fade to black. Step by step the light comes back, but Stacy is now in the dark room. (With this move you play more with the tension in the scene).

After her falling to the ground (~2:45 min) she should lay on her belly. In this position the tentacles keep her in place holding her on her wrists and ankles. Other tentacles start to move on her back, legs, and arms. After a while the tentacles rip/strip her cloth. They continue probing her; they move stepwise closer and closer to her pussy. She tries to fight them off. The alien is turning her on the back and one tentacle starts to play with her pussy. The tentacle finds her clit and starts to “play” with it. Stacy gets aroused. She feels a bit overwhelmed form the situation/sensation. She has read the warning on the magic movie. She feels uncomfortable with the tentacles and the strange alien being they belong to, but the sensation from the clitoral stimulation is fantastic. She starts to relax a bit. Now the penetration begins (~3:47).

For the all-the-way -through part Stacy should be in a more “exposed” position. Maybe like Veronica Leal in extreme cum-flation. (I don`t necessarily speak of an anal to mouth a-t-w-t) It should just show, that the all-the-way-through is a kind of highlight (highest point of tension). Finally, I would also add a little ending. The cum-bath is okay, and we see finally the joy in the eyes of Stacy. We might have the same flickering of lights and fade to black and we see Stacy sleeping on the sofa in her living room with a satisfied expression on her face. She wakes up. She switches off the TV-set, stands up and goes to bed. When she gets up a small alien egg is laying on the sofa. (Tension-rich music and fade to purple😊)



To rate this video, I re-use my 10 stars extended rating (6 = art; 7 = fine art; 8 = extreme fine art; 9 = near perfect; 10 = perfect). My rating would be 7 stars resulting from great acting, beautiful actress, excellent capturing of feelings. The points needed for a higher score are a bit more thrilling composition of the cool story and the, a bit too boring and mediocris, action (sex) scene. I would add 1 point as “newbie” bonus for Mark ending up in an 8 stars Mr. Tomato`s rating. Thank you for making this video.
 
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king

Member
Thank`s CoWHentaied for the first review.
Here is my impressions and review to the video:

Girl: 9/10: Great! Stacy Cruz. She played amazingly. The fear in her eyes/face fells real. She is beautiful. I bit more “womanish” than the usual girls; I really love this contrast.

Story: 9/10: The background story is great. I like the start in a normal life scene. It is always a great starting point for increasing the tension.

Effects: 5/10: The effects were very “standard”. I didn`t see anything new.

Props: 7/10: I like the idea of setting it up in the living room to start the video. The dark room setting is solid and does its job well. Nothing special, but also nothing to complain.

Music 3/10: There was no music, except from the horror movie she was watching. The sound effects and her moaning were okay, noting special.

Plot: 7/10: The plot idea is so great. A girl watching a horror movie (at least I would guess it) landing herself in a horror movie, top. The fear and emotions of the girl are a captured so amazingly. Here we see the big potential of the new director. He has the right feeling to capture the emotion of the girl. Either via close-up facial shots without eye-contact; sometimes with full body shots and the eyes moving quickly from left to right. Top! I love how the alien is ripping off the cloth of the girl. The sex scene is solid, however a bit boring to mediocris. The start is great with the ripping of the cloth a feet close-up and the smooth and soft first tentacle penetration/entry. Stacy plays fantastically; she starts from fear and the wish to get away towards pleasure later. Nevertheless, after the first penetration the sex would have needed more variation to increase and decrease tension. Stacy`s facial expression during the all-the-way-through was played, as she was absent and not into the scene.

Composition: The composition was great. I love the intro. Only a minor weak point was the transition to the darks room.

Director: 8/10: Mark has a very good potential. He has an excellent eye to capture the feelings of Stacy, which give the video some depths. He is great at face shots. He was a bit trying to copy Romero`s style, e.g. with the feet close-ups or the position of the girl sitting on the dark-room`s floor. I would like to see Mark developing his own style a bit more. This would give more directions for Hentaied, which would make the site more interesting.

Alternative Plot lines ideas: I also would like to give an alternative plot line, which I think would have given the video more profile, depth, and a bit more thrill. Only little changes:

Starting point: Stacy opens a box with a blue-ray disc (maybe as a gift from a friend?). The box indicates this is a magical movie or so. She starts watching.

At 1:00 min: The transition to the dark room: Stacy flips her blanket and sees the tentacle. Now the natural behaviour of any human would be Freeze, flight, fight, or fright. In this case I would love to see Stacy jumping up, running to the bathroom, locking up the door and hiding in the tub. We hear the tentacles approaching. They start to knock on the door. The knocking gets louder and louder. Suddenly the light starts to flicker and shuts off. Fade to black. Step by step the light comes back, but Stacy is now in the dark room. (With this move you play more with the tension in the scene).

After her falling to the ground (~2:45 min) she should lay on her belly. In this position the tentacles keep her in place holding her on her wrists and ankles. Other tentacles start to move on her back, legs, and arms. After a while the tentacles rip/strip her cloth. They continue probing her; they move stepwise closer and closer to her pussy. She tries to fight them off. The alien is turning her on the back and one tentacle starts to play with her pussy. The tentacle finds her clit and starts to “play” with it. Stacy gets aroused. She feels a bit overwhelmed form the situation/sensation. She has read the warning on the magic movie. She feels uncomfortable with the tentacles and the strange alien being they belong to, but the sensation from the clitoral stimulation is fantastic. She starts to relax a bit. Now the penetration begins (~3:47).

For the all-the-way -through part Stacy should be in a more “exposed” position. Maybe like Veronica Leal in extreme cum-flation. (I don`t necessarily speak of an anal to mouth a-t-w-t) It should just show, that the all-the-way-through is a kind of highlight (highest point of tension). Finally, I would also add a little ending. The cum-bath is okay, and we see finally the joy in the eyes of Stacy. We might have the same flickering of lights and fade to black and we see Stacy sleeping on the sofa in her living room with a satisfied expression on her face. She wakes up. She switches off the TV-set, stands up and goes to bed. When she gets up a small alien egg is laying on the sofa. (Tension-rich music and fade to purple😊)



To rate this video, I re-use my 10 stars extended rating (6 = art; 7 = fine art; 8 = extreme fine art; 9 = near perfect; 10 = perfect). My rating would be 7 stars resulting from great acting, beautiful actress, excellent capturing of feelings. The points needed for a higher score are a bit more thrilling composition of the cool story and the, a bit too boring and mediocris, action (sex) scene. I would add 1 point as “newbie” bonus for Mark ending up in an 8 stars Mr. Tomato`s rating. Thank you for making this video.
I think the main issues of this video is that they change background. It would be more difficult i know, but shooting the entire scene in the living woulde much much better. Or if you change it like it happened it would be nice to have a short scene where mr alien is moving her body.
I really like the girl, but i want more big boobs.
Anyway goodjob
 

CoWHentaied

Member
Thank`s CoWHentaied for the first review.
Here is my impressions and review to the video:

Girl: 9/10: Great! Stacy Cruz. She played amazingly. The fear in her eyes/face fells real. She is beautiful. I bit more “womanish” than the usual girls; I really love this contrast.

Story: 9/10: The background story is great. I like the start in a normal life scene. It is always a great starting point for increasing the tension.

Effects: 5/10: The effects were very “standard”. I didn`t see anything new.

Props: 7/10: I like the idea of setting it up in the living room to start the video. The dark room setting is solid and does its job well. Nothing special, but also nothing to complain.

Music 3/10: There was no music, except from the horror movie she was watching. The sound effects and her moaning were okay, nothing special.

Plot: 7/10: The plot idea is so great. A girl watching a horror movie (at least I would guess it) landing herself in a horror movie, top. The fear and emotions of the girl are a captured so amazingly. Here we see the big potential of the new director. He has the right feeling to capture the emotion of the girl. Either via close-up facial shots without eye-contact; sometimes with full body shots and the eyes moving quickly from left to right. Top! I love how the alien is ripping off the cloth of the girl. The sex scene is solid, however a bit boring to mediocris. The start is great with the ripping of the cloth a feet close-up and the smooth and soft first tentacle penetration/entry. Stacy plays fantastically; she starts from fear and the wish to get away towards pleasure later. Nevertheless, after the first penetration the sex would have needed more variation to increase and decrease tension. Stacy`s facial expression during the all-the-way-through was played, as she was absent and not into the scene.

Composition: The composition was great. I love the intro. Only a minor weak point was the transition to the darks room.

Director: 8/10: Mark has a very good potential. He has an excellent eye to capture the feelings of Stacy, which give the video some depths. He is great at face shots. He was a bit trying to copy Romero`s style, e.g. with the feet close-ups or the position of the girl sitting on the dark-room`s floor. I would like to see Mark developing his own style a bit more. This would give more directions for Hentaied, which would make the site more interesting.

Alternative Plot lines ideas: I also would like to give an alternative plot line, which I think would have given the video more profile, depth, and a bit more thrill. Only little changes:

Starting point: Stacy opens a box with a blue-ray disc (maybe as a gift from a friend?). The box indicates this is a magical movie or so. She starts watching.

At 1:00 min: The transition to the dark room: Stacy flips her blanket and sees the tentacle. Now the natural behaviour of any human would be Freeze, flight, fight, or fright. In this case I would love to see Stacy jumping up, running to the bathroom, locking up the door and hiding in the tub. We hear the tentacles approaching. They start to knock on the door. The knocking gets louder and louder. Suddenly the light starts to flicker and shuts off. Fade to black. Step by step the light comes back, but Stacy is now in the dark room. (With this move you play more with the tension in the scene).

After her falling to the ground (~2:45 min) she should lay on her belly. In this position the tentacles keep her in place holding her on her wrists and ankles. Other tentacles start to move on her back, legs, and arms. After a while the tentacles rip/strip her cloth. They continue probing her; they move stepwise closer and closer to her pussy. She tries to fight them off. The alien is turning her on the back and one tentacle starts to play with her pussy. The tentacle finds her clit and starts to “play” with it. Stacy gets aroused. She feels a bit overwhelmed form the situation/sensation. She has read the warning on the magic movie. She feels uncomfortable with the tentacles and the strange alien being they belong to, but the sensation from the clitoral stimulation is fantastic. She starts to relax a bit. Now the penetration begins (~3:47).

For the all-the-way -through part Stacy should be in a more “exposed” position. Maybe like Veronica Leal in extreme cum-flation. (I don`t necessarily speak of an anal to mouth a-t-w-t) It should just show, that the all-the-way-through is a kind of highlight (highest point of tension). Finally, I would also add a little ending. The cum-bath is okay, and we see finally the joy in the eyes of Stacy. We might have the same flickering of lights and fade to black and we see Stacy sleeping on the sofa in her living room with a satisfied expression on her face. She wakes up. She switches off the TV-set, stands up and goes to bed. When she gets up a small alien egg is laying on the sofa. (Tension-rich music and fade to purple😊)



To rate this video, I re-use my 10 stars extended rating (6 = art; 7 = fine art; 8 = extreme fine art; 9 = near perfect; 10 = perfect). My rating would be 7 stars resulting from great acting, beautiful actress, excellent capturing of feelings. The points needed for a higher score are a bit more thrilling composition of the cool story and the, a bit too boring and mediocris, action (sex) scene. I would add 1 point as “newbie” bonus for Mark ending up in an 8 stars Mr. Tomato`s rating. Thank you for making this video.
Thanks for that ! .. I love other impressions and it also helps me reevaluate my (maybe a bit too harsh) rating - sorry for that..
I also tried to really stick to the rating and since 8 is extreme fine art - close but not 100% there yet ... Also I should note a 7 already meaning its way better than the HQ porn elsewhere..

I guess its a solid 5/10 (or even +1: 6/10 if you considering his first video) since I somewhat enjoyed watching it and I got lost and distracted by little detailes which annoyed me personally (the tentacles and some inconsistencies and still thinking about the transitions) and the potential of the video & producer is huge!
 
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