The book

[CoWHentaied]

The Book

To rate this video, I use 10 stars extended rating (1 = oh well nudity; 2 = guess we fuck; 3 = we got some camera; 4 = porn; 5 = HQ porn; 6 = art; 7 = fine art; 8 = extreme fine art; 9 = near perfect; 10 = perfect). As a relation: watchable HQ porn stumbles around 5! IMPORTANT: Everything 6+ is very good in my opinion and very well worth it. Everything above is bonus!

Oh fuck ..thats a hard one.. there is so much good in this video I really like …love .. which has the potential that would have made it to one of the best videos yet …but there are some flaws which are hard to take and distract to really enjoy it.. I loving hate it and I hate the fact that I’m loving it…

Girl (just the personal impression of the girl):

8.5/5 Lottie as its best .. stunning performance and dedication really got me! I never enjoyed her that much! Although I couldn’t really figure out what makes her laugh and why she is doing it… maybe she’s crazy .. in that case its kinda matching …

Really really nice!

Story (the idea behind the video)

8/5 just the intro changed so much for the video .. I really like it!

Also the “manual” interaction with the tentacles of her mixed with her excitement were a very good addition to the usual stuff and I like it that way..

Combining all those different interactions from fucking to sucking is quite nice and even the footjob kinda turned me on (especially when we could see her in the background touching herself.. 16:00 min …sadly too short) and I hate foot-things … so nice job on this end!

The blowing scene at the end 18:00+ only could be topped by the end the licking of the cum and swallowing it.. damn that’s hot…

The creativity/variance in this video its really a double + …

Effects (special effects if needed) :

7/5 – still it doesn’t need much… and it still works

Props (Props used)

6/5 - Nice intro and location ..

Those tentacles.. boy… they do make the editing essential and here it failed badly in the 1st half… you should really focus on get new shapes!

Music

6/5 - I find the sound of the cum still a bit too much

Plot (Everything what happens in the video making sense?)

7/10 – besides some hints in “Execution” it all seems pretty reasonable

Composition

7/10.. amazing as usual - nice views … kinda hard to find something…

• I do have difficulties with the “side-by-side” scenes cause often they are not matching … and they should be?
• Also sometimes cropping out some of the action kinda .. sucks … besides the fact the top view was just stunning…
• Editing is part of the composition … sadly it failed here big time .. see next point for examples…

Execution (any flaws that doesn’t make sense? Good things that should be mentioned)

• Flaws…
• “deeper deeper” – nothing happens..
• The first “why are you leaving” .. they weren’t… 09:00 min mark
• 18:50min ..Side by side … one side she’s laying on her back… the other one on her front
• 20:30min .. Side by side .. on one side she is shaking her ass .. on the other side .. its not moving at all
• 9:50 min mark .. great performance showing something is “going deeper” .. but it doesn’t
• 10:00min “deeper” .. its obviously just the tip in her ..
• 10:10min “fuck my body.. destroy me” .. that’s golden on one side! (in my ears and her face) And on the other side nothing happens .. ! you really need other tentacles in this case! She is going nuts … which is stunning but on the tentacle side NOTHING happens.. such a shame .. really .. it could have been so much more!!!!
• 10:25 everything good again … the slow entering of the tentacle.. oh boy.. that works!
• 10:35 somehow the “entering” started fresh … what ftw?
• 10:55 “oh so huge for me” .. it was already deeper …
• 11:15 … again straight change again from .. wtf to damn that nice! Just getting better till 12:00
• 12:25 … why cropping the good parts.. If that tentacle in that diameter is in her .. I wanna see it!
• Also her front view while shaking her ass could have been recorded slightly from the side .. to see that ass shake!
• Good things…
• ++ Great variation on “action” scenes !! I like it.. I really do!
• I still love it!

Director 7,5/5

I really like the improvements … and now it's time to get on with it …

All in All ... I go with 7.5/5 .. something between very fine and extremely fine! Besides those flaws minor or bigger … its still a very amazing video .. I really adore the direction its going … the actress / director amazing piece of art .. editor not so much this time

 

[Alberto]

8.5/5 Lottie as its best .. stunning performance and dedication really got me! I never enjoyed her that much! Although I couldn’t really figure out what makes her laugh and why she is doing it… maybe she’s crazy .. in that case its kinda matching …

Really really nice!

I totally agree with what you wrote. Definately Lottie did a magnificent job. And also I was curious about these two things here:

“deeper deeper” – nothing happens..

Indeed. "Deeper deeper" has to be an intro for more intense tentacle action.

Also her front view while shaking her ass could have been recorded slightly from the side .. to see that ass shake!

See Lottie moving her ass in one picture and have no corresponding moves on the other was disturbing. And I would also have liked seeing more from her showing things from an slightly sideways angle.

Nontheless I enjoy what I see here. So I would rate it 8 out of 10.

 

[CoWHentaied]

Great video. Just a first impression, whiteout a detailed feedback!
I love the erotic mood of the scene, very artful and great performance of Lottie.
I think the story has some potential.
I think of a series.
I love the setting of the vid in the 1920th (props, dress, and hairstyle).
Maybe in the next episode 100 years later the book is found by her grand—granddaughter (maybe Jia). She has an experience with the alien inside the book and step wise finds out the secrets of the book. So we have several episodes playing in historical epochs leading to the origins of the book (maybe ancient Egypt or Mesopotamia).
What do you t hink?
Have a great day!

I totally love that idea .. somewhere you mentioned the erotic mood could already be starting while she is reading the book ... reading something an imagining it can be pretty intense (and it can be shown as the intro ...) .. and maybe an orgasm while ready leading to something even more "special" ... the possibilities are endless

 

[FFan4L]

Great video. Just a first impression, whiteout a detailed feedback!
I love the erotic mood of the scene, very artful and great performance of Lottie.
I think the story has some potential.
I think of a series.
I love the setting of the vid in the 1920th (props, dress, and hairstyle).
Maybe in the next episode 100 years later the book is found by her grand—granddaughter (maybe Jia). She has an experience with the alien inside the book and step wise finds out the secrets of the book. So we have several episodes playing in historical epochs leading to the origins of the book (maybe ancient Egypt or Mesopotamia).
What do you t hink?
Have a great day!

I love the idea of the historical setting, particularly ancient Egypt/Mesopotamia. I'd would really need some setpieces though to sell it, and more important even costumes: one of my favourite works by Wicked still ist "Curse Eternal", because I just love love love Jessica Drake in that kind of golden-chainmail-bra-"glam-slavegirl-look". It's just hot by it's very nature and severly underused as a setting. It also has this kind of Robert E. Howart Kink-sensation I think. Lot of potential there, basically entirely unexplored (by Hentai as well afaik).

 

[FFan4L]

To rate this video, I use 10 stars extended rating (1 = oh well nudity; 2 = guess we fuck; 3 = we got some camera; 4 = porn; 5 = HQ porn; 6 = art; 7 = fine art; 8 = extreme fine art; 9 = near perfect; 10 = perfect). As a relation: watchable HQ porn stumbles around 5! IMPORTANT: Everything 6+ is very good in my opinion and very well worth it. Everything above is bonus!

Oh fuck ..thats a hard one.. there is so much good in this video I really like …love .. which has the potential that would have made it to one of the best videos yet …but there are some flaws which are hard to take and distract to really enjoy it.. I loving hate it and I hate the fact that I’m loving it…

Girl (just the personal impression of the girl):

8.5/5 Lottie as its best .. stunning performance and dedication really got me! I never enjoyed her that much! Although I couldn’t really figure out what makes her laugh and why she is doing it… maybe she’s crazy .. in that case its kinda matching …

Really really nice!

Story (the idea behind the video)

8/5 just the intro changed so much for the video .. I really like it!

Also the “manual” interaction with the tentacles of her mixed with her excitement were a very good addition to the usual stuff and I like it that way..

Combining all those different interactions from fucking to sucking is quite nice and even the footjob kinda turned me on (especially when we could see her in the background touching herself.. 16:00 min …sadly too short) and I hate foot-things … so nice job on this end!

The blowing scene at the end 18:00+ only could be topped by the end the licking of the cum and swallowing it.. damn that’s hot…

The creativity/variance in this video its really a double + …

Effects (special effects if needed) :

7/5 – still it doesn’t need much… and it still works

Props (Props used)

6/5 - Nice intro and location ..

Those tentacles.. boy… they do make the editing essential and here it failed badly in the 1st half… you should really focus on get new shapes!

Music

6/5 - I find the sound of the cum still a bit too much

Plot (Everything what happens in the video making sense?)

7/10 – besides some hints in “Execution” it all seems pretty reasonable

Composition

7/10.. amazing as usual - nice views … kinda hard to find something…

• I do have difficulties with the “side-by-side” scenes cause often they are not matching … and they should be?
• Also sometimes cropping out some of the action kinda .. sucks … besides the fact the top view was just stunning…
• Editing is part of the composition … sadly it failed here big time .. see next point for examples…

Execution (any flaws that doesn’t make sense? Good things that should be mentioned)

• Flaws…
• “deeper deeper” – nothing happens..
• The first “why are you leaving” .. they weren’t… 09:00 min mark
• 18:50min ..Side by side … one side she’s laying on her back… the other one on her front
• 20:30min .. Side by side .. on one side she is shaking her ass .. on the other side .. its not moving at all
• 9:50 min mark .. great performance showing something is “going deeper” .. but it doesn’t
• 10:00min “deeper” .. its obviously just the tip in her ..
• 10:10min “fuck my body.. destroy me” .. that’s golden on one side! (in my ears and her face) And on the other side nothing happens .. ! you really need other tentacles in this case! She is going nuts … which is stunning but on the tentacle side NOTHING happens.. such a shame .. really .. it could have been so much more!!!!
• 10:25 everything good again … the slow entering of the tentacle.. oh boy.. that works!
• 10:35 somehow the “entering” started fresh … what ftw?
• 10:55 “oh so huge for me” .. it was already deeper …
• 11:15 … again straight change again from .. wtf to damn that nice! Just getting better till 12:00
• 12:25 … why cropping the good parts.. If that tentacle in that diameter is in her .. I wanna see it!
• Also her front view while shaking her ass could have been recorded slightly from the side .. to see that ass shake!
• Good things…
• ++ Great variation on “action” scenes !! I like it.. I really do!
• I still love it!

Director 7,5/5

I really like the improvements … and now it's time to get on with it …

All in All ... I go with 7.5/5 .. something between very fine and extremely fine! Besides those flaws minor or bigger … its still a very amazing video .. I really adore the direction its going … the actress / director amazing piece of art .. editor not so much this time

Wow that's one in-depth review there! I gotta agree with you in general.

Some things I've noticed since I subbed last week, that apply to this new video as well more or less, is the abundance of a) "jump cuts", which unfortunately hurt the flow of any coupulation scene, as well as the lack of b) a basic "thrusting" sensation with the tentacle. I feel like most if not all tentacles are jut wiggling basically, which is a shame. Some of the older JAV tentacle movies (SOD and such) did this better. I'm not sure if this is feasible, but I really think more emphasis ought to be on the ins-and-outs of it ... pun intended I haven't seen nothing yet, that really conveyed the sensation that the tentacles had a good go at pistoning the girl.

 

[king]

tbh i didn't like this video, maybe i'm the only one here, but i don't fancy lottie much.
Looking forward to the next one.

 

[CoWHentaied]

tbh i didn't like this video, maybe i'm the only one here, but i don't fancy lottie much.
Looking forward to the next one.

Honest answer, I like that ...
Is it just because of the actress? ... I do .. and I guess the staff too ... like critics since its a good source to improve .. so could you please a bit more specific?

 

[king]

I always want to be constructive because i love this site and also i value the great amount of work behind each video, so i will never be disrespectfull. I didn't particularly like the idea of "the book", at least not in this video and i don't like Lottie.
This is just my opinion, i'm really looking forward to the next videos
P.S i hope to have new ideas to suggest

 

[nommeduplume]

• 10:00min “deeper” .. its obviously just the tip in her ..
• 10:10min “fuck my body.. destroy me” .. that’s golden on one side! (in my ears and her face) And on the other side nothing happens .. ! you really need other tentacles in this case! She is going nuts … which is stunning but on the tentacle side NOTHING happens.. such a shame .. really .. it could have been so much more!!!!

Nice review! I have to say I agree with you on the above. I LOVE the videos here and I'm definitly being picky here but Ithink many of the people here are here for the deep unreal penetrations and the "all the way through" style tentacle scenes that you just don't find anywhere else. But, and I'm really being an armchair cinematographer here, I feel like so often they don't "sell" it or break the illusion with the way they do the insertions.

For that really "REAL" feeling we want to see the tentacle get to the larger diameter and then just keep sliding in for an unreal amount of time. Obviously this is impossible with real human physiology but I feel with a bit of editing it could really be sold. I'm SURE they've thought of it but lets explore here.

So we take a tentacle and we film the end going in, we film it going in to the maximum the actress can take it.. it's usually in pretty wide by then. We cut to a shot of her face eyes rolling, loving it. We then cut, take out the tentacle and swap it for one with the first X inches cut off it. So it LOOKS like it's the same depth as it was before but really only a half inch is inside her.

Then we start filming again and we can slide in (now it's at the steady diameter point) another 5-6 inches of the tentacle. Cut to her face going wild again, while it's not on the tentacle, back it out to the half inch point again. Then cut back and slide it in 6 inches again. Rinse and repeat with cutting the face, maybe pause, slide it back out, cut to side shot, sliding it back in, rinse. repeat.

As long as the diameter of the tentacle is the same at this point it would give 100% the illusion of a tentacle just sliding into her for an impossible distance. It would maintain the illusion of endless entry without that "getting to the bottom of her and just pushing harder pretending it's still going in " effect we get in a lot of the videos.

No CGI needed. Just some clever camera work, a gaffed prop and the magic of editing. You could get a really convincing "6 feet have slid into her" feeling.

The often get the coming out the mouth scenes so right. It's just a bit disappointing they can't always nail the entry scenes, Which I think they should be able to! They're so good at all the things.

Anyway. My little armchair thoughts post, thanks for coming to my TED talk.