HarumiHie
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Preface
‘Archie and his wife Julia have invited a guest over for dinner tonight, Archie’s childhood friend Isaac. Isaac has lived an incredibly successful life whilst Archie has always remained in his shadow, tonight however would be different as Archie can finally show off his own house and lifestyle. Unfortunately for Archie, his neglect for his wife and unawareness of why Isaac is so successful will cost him dearly tonight.’
Script (1/2)
Cut to:
Int. Kitchen - Night
JULIA is in the kitchen, chopping up vegetables as she’s preparing a dish. Although she’s wearing a cooking apron, hidden underneath is a beautiful dress. Her hair, makeup and jewellery are equally stunning too. As she continues chopping, her husband ARCHIE enters the kitchen. Archie is equally well-dressed just like his wife however his nervous energy is in high contrast to Julia’s rather bored mood. He paces around the
Archie (Nervous)
Any minute now. He should be here any minute now.
Julia
Nervous, honey?
Archie (Sternly)
Julia please, just please be on your best behaviour tonight.
Julia rolls her eyes as she carries on chopping vegetables.
Archie
Hmm, he’s rubbed his success in my face all my life, now I can finally shove it all back into his face.
Julia (Sarcastic)
Wow, I’ve never seen you put so much effort into someone… not even me…
A doorbell rings through the house.
Archie (Grinning)
He’s here! Let’s do this.
Cut to:
Int. Foyer - Night
Archie approaches the front door to the house. He opens the door revealing his guest, Isaac. Isaac himself is a man with a muscular physique, stylish hair, fashionable clothing and a charismatic energy. Archie greets him with a handshake.
Archie (Handshake)
Hello Isaac.
Isaac (Handshake)
It’s good to see you, my friend.
Archie invites Isaac inside.
Archie (Showboating)
Welcome to Fort Archie, what do you think?
Isaac looks around at the interior of the house, nodding his head.
Isaac
I have to admit this is a really nice home you’ve got yourself.
Archie (Shrugs shoulders)
What can I say…
Isaac and Archie both turn their attention towards Julia as she walks into the foyer, no longer wearing her kitchen apron.
Archie
Isaac, I’d like you to meet my wife, Julia.
Julia and Isaac smile at one another as she approaches her guest.
Julia
Hi.
Isaac
It’s a pleasure to meet you, Julia.
As Julia goes in for a hug, Isaac gives her a quick peck on the cheek.
Julia (Surprised)
Oh my, such a gentleman. It’s nice to finally meet you too. Archie talks about you all the time.
Archie
Can’t believe how long it’s taken for you to meet one another.
Julia
I know you mentioned he was into fitness but, just wow. I wasn’t expecting you to look so muscular.
Isaac
Thank you. I must say, you look very stunning yourself. Archie’s a lucky man.
Julia blushes at Isaac’s complement, unable to contain her smile.
Archie
Oh no, if we’re talking about luck you’ve got it all pal. (To Julia) This man never had to study for a test, he was blessed with perfect memory…
As Archie rambles on to his wife about Isaac’s talents, Isaac glances down at Julia’s cleavage whilst she’s not looking.
Archie
…it’s even more crazy to- (To Isaac) Hey, don’t think I didn’t notice…
Isaac is caught off guard by Archie’s remark.
Archie
… you’ve got your classic watch on.
Isaac (Holds wrist up)
Oh, this old thing, you know how important this is to me, never go anywhere without it.
Archie
I remember the first time you wore it in sixth grade…
As Archie enters another ramble, Isaac presses a small button on his watch.
Archie
… we were all ju-
Doing so causes both Archie and Julia to pause in place as a cosmic-like sound to echo through the house. Whilst Isaac can move freely, the husband and wife are frozen in time. Isaac approaches Julia.
Isaac
God you’re beautiful.
He leans in and gives her a long, passionate kiss on the lips. Isaac pulls away and stands roughly where he once stood. Pressing the button on his watch again causes the couple to unfreeze.
Archie
-st messing around on Uncle Gustin’s land so that he-
Isaac (Interrupts)
I have a feeling Julia’s probably getting bored of hearing our old stories. Why don’t we take a look around this house of yours?
Archie
You’re absolutely right. I’ll take Isaac for a tour whilst you watch over the food, okay honey?
Julia (Dazed)
Uh… yeah.
The two men head off to view the house whilst Julia stands there, looking confused. She rubs two fingers across her lips.
Julia (To herself)
Why are my…
She shakes her head, assuming this strange feeling was nothing to think about. Julia heads back into the kitchen.
Cut to:
Int. Office Room - Night
Archie guides Isaac to his home office, where he begins another ramble.
Archie
And this is where I work at home, remember that deal with GygaNet I closed? This is where it happened and it was a-
Archie freezes as Isaac activates his watch. He sighs out of boredom before looking at the doorway to the office room with a sly smirk growing on his face.
Cut to:
Int. Kitchen - Night
Isaac enters the kitchen and finds Julia. She stands frozen as her body is towards Isaac whilst her head faces her side, looking down at a frying pan of food. Getting close up to her, Isaac slides the straps of her dress to the side, exposing her breasts.
Isaac (Captivated)
Jesus Christ
He begins to fondle Julia’s breasts, massaging them in his hands before lowering his head down and sucking on her nipples.
Isaac
Ohh yeah, (Sucking) so fucking delicious.
Satisfied for now, Isaac adjusts the straps to Julia’s dress and leaves the kitchen. After a few seconds, that familiar futuristic sound rings through the kitchen and Julia unfreezes, turning her head straight as she walks forward. Suddenly coming to a stop, Julia breathes heavily as she’s overwhelmed by a strange sensation. She closes her eyes whilst slipping her hands inside of her dress, feeling her nipples.
Julia (Aroused)
Mmmm, aaaah.
Realising what she’s doing, Julia snaps out of her aroused state.
Julia (To herself)
What is up with me tonight? Why am I doing this?
‘Archie and his wife Julia have invited a guest over for dinner tonight, Archie’s childhood friend Isaac. Isaac has lived an incredibly successful life whilst Archie has always remained in his shadow, tonight however would be different as Archie can finally show off his own house and lifestyle. Unfortunately for Archie, his neglect for his wife and unawareness of why Isaac is so successful will cost him dearly tonight.’
Script (1/2)
Cut to:
Int. Kitchen - Night
JULIA is in the kitchen, chopping up vegetables as she’s preparing a dish. Although she’s wearing a cooking apron, hidden underneath is a beautiful dress. Her hair, makeup and jewellery are equally stunning too. As she continues chopping, her husband ARCHIE enters the kitchen. Archie is equally well-dressed just like his wife however his nervous energy is in high contrast to Julia’s rather bored mood. He paces around the
Archie (Nervous)
Any minute now. He should be here any minute now.
Julia
Nervous, honey?
Archie (Sternly)
Julia please, just please be on your best behaviour tonight.
Julia rolls her eyes as she carries on chopping vegetables.
Archie
Hmm, he’s rubbed his success in my face all my life, now I can finally shove it all back into his face.
Julia (Sarcastic)
Wow, I’ve never seen you put so much effort into someone… not even me…
A doorbell rings through the house.
Archie (Grinning)
He’s here! Let’s do this.
Cut to:
Int. Foyer - Night
Archie approaches the front door to the house. He opens the door revealing his guest, Isaac. Isaac himself is a man with a muscular physique, stylish hair, fashionable clothing and a charismatic energy. Archie greets him with a handshake.
Archie (Handshake)
Hello Isaac.
Isaac (Handshake)
It’s good to see you, my friend.
Archie invites Isaac inside.
Archie (Showboating)
Welcome to Fort Archie, what do you think?
Isaac looks around at the interior of the house, nodding his head.
Isaac
I have to admit this is a really nice home you’ve got yourself.
Archie (Shrugs shoulders)
What can I say…
Isaac and Archie both turn their attention towards Julia as she walks into the foyer, no longer wearing her kitchen apron.
Archie
Isaac, I’d like you to meet my wife, Julia.
Julia and Isaac smile at one another as she approaches her guest.
Julia
Hi.
Isaac
It’s a pleasure to meet you, Julia.
As Julia goes in for a hug, Isaac gives her a quick peck on the cheek.
Julia (Surprised)
Oh my, such a gentleman. It’s nice to finally meet you too. Archie talks about you all the time.
Archie
Can’t believe how long it’s taken for you to meet one another.
Julia
I know you mentioned he was into fitness but, just wow. I wasn’t expecting you to look so muscular.
Isaac
Thank you. I must say, you look very stunning yourself. Archie’s a lucky man.
Julia blushes at Isaac’s complement, unable to contain her smile.
Archie
Oh no, if we’re talking about luck you’ve got it all pal. (To Julia) This man never had to study for a test, he was blessed with perfect memory…
As Archie rambles on to his wife about Isaac’s talents, Isaac glances down at Julia’s cleavage whilst she’s not looking.
Archie
…it’s even more crazy to- (To Isaac) Hey, don’t think I didn’t notice…
Isaac is caught off guard by Archie’s remark.
Archie
… you’ve got your classic watch on.
Isaac (Holds wrist up)
Oh, this old thing, you know how important this is to me, never go anywhere without it.
Archie
I remember the first time you wore it in sixth grade…
As Archie enters another ramble, Isaac presses a small button on his watch.
Archie
… we were all ju-
Doing so causes both Archie and Julia to pause in place as a cosmic-like sound to echo through the house. Whilst Isaac can move freely, the husband and wife are frozen in time. Isaac approaches Julia.
Isaac
God you’re beautiful.
He leans in and gives her a long, passionate kiss on the lips. Isaac pulls away and stands roughly where he once stood. Pressing the button on his watch again causes the couple to unfreeze.
Archie
-st messing around on Uncle Gustin’s land so that he-
Isaac (Interrupts)
I have a feeling Julia’s probably getting bored of hearing our old stories. Why don’t we take a look around this house of yours?
Archie
You’re absolutely right. I’ll take Isaac for a tour whilst you watch over the food, okay honey?
Julia (Dazed)
Uh… yeah.
The two men head off to view the house whilst Julia stands there, looking confused. She rubs two fingers across her lips.
Julia (To herself)
Why are my…
She shakes her head, assuming this strange feeling was nothing to think about. Julia heads back into the kitchen.
Cut to:
Int. Office Room - Night
Archie guides Isaac to his home office, where he begins another ramble.
Archie
And this is where I work at home, remember that deal with GygaNet I closed? This is where it happened and it was a-
Archie freezes as Isaac activates his watch. He sighs out of boredom before looking at the doorway to the office room with a sly smirk growing on his face.
Cut to:
Int. Kitchen - Night
Isaac enters the kitchen and finds Julia. She stands frozen as her body is towards Isaac whilst her head faces her side, looking down at a frying pan of food. Getting close up to her, Isaac slides the straps of her dress to the side, exposing her breasts.
Isaac (Captivated)
Jesus Christ
He begins to fondle Julia’s breasts, massaging them in his hands before lowering his head down and sucking on her nipples.
Isaac
Ohh yeah, (Sucking) so fucking delicious.
Satisfied for now, Isaac adjusts the straps to Julia’s dress and leaves the kitchen. After a few seconds, that familiar futuristic sound rings through the kitchen and Julia unfreezes, turning her head straight as she walks forward. Suddenly coming to a stop, Julia breathes heavily as she’s overwhelmed by a strange sensation. She closes her eyes whilst slipping her hands inside of her dress, feeling her nipples.
Julia (Aroused)
Mmmm, aaaah.
Realising what she’s doing, Julia snaps out of her aroused state.
Julia (To herself)
What is up with me tonight? Why am I doing this?